Shadowrun
Shadowrun Play => Character creation and critique => Topic started by: Raiderjoseph on <02-26-16/1533:40>
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I havent even fully developed his backstory yet. Here is though.
I know his street name will be Gaijin.
-- Priorities --
Metatype Elf
Attributes Module
Magic Mundane
Skills Module
Resources Module
-- Karma Expenditure --
750 Starting Karma
-15 for Elf
-15 for UCAS Citizenship: General UCAS
-40 for Slave
-50 for Corporate Education
-65 for State University
-100 for Wage Slave
-15 for buying out Corp Limited SIN
-135 for Body,Reaction,and Strength 4
-110 for Agillity 7
-56 for Blades 7
-24 for Perception and Gymnastics 3
-6 for Pistols 2
-10 for Atzlander Spanish 4
-10 for Japanese 4
-5 for Biocompatibilty (Cyberwear)
-3 for Agile Defender
-5 for Sensei
-10 for Guts
+8 for Paranoia
+7 for Flashbacks
+7 for Phobia: Blood Mages
+5 for Day Job (Janitor Service)
-2 for Intro Runner Pack
-12 for
-6 for Pilot Groundcraft 2
-7 for Blade Specialization: Parrying
-7 for Blade Specialization: Katana
-12 for Rating 3 Active Skill
Remaining
7
-- Attributes --
Body 4
Agility 7
Reaction 4
Strength 4
Willpower 3
Logic 3
Intuition 2
Charisma 4
Edge 1
Essence 6.00
Initiative -
Physical Condition Monitor -
Stun Condition Monitor -
Overflow Boxes -
Physical Limit -
Mental Limit -
Social Limit -
-- Qualities --
Blandness
Friends in High Places
Guts
Sensei
Paranoia
Flashbacks
Phobia: Blood Mages
Day Job (Janitor Service)
-- Skills --
Computer: 2
Hardware: 1
Software: 1
Etiquette: 6
Con (Fast Talking): 2
Chemistry: 1
Gymnastics: 3
Perception: 3
Negotiation: 2
Blades (Katana) (Parrying): 7 (9)
Unarmed: 4
Pistols: 2
Pilot Groundcraft: 2
-- Skill Groups –
-- Knowledge/Language Skills --
English: N
Mandarin: 3
Atzlaner Spanish: 4
Japanese: 4
Academic:
History: 2
UCAS: 1
Philosophy : 3
Blood Magic: 1
Economics: 5
Street:
Seattle: 2
Professional Knowledge:
Aztechnology: 4
Janitor: 2
Administration: 6
-- Augmentations/Magic/Adept Powers --
-- Gear --
20000 Nuyen Start
-4000 for Intro Runner Pack
Fake SIN rating 1
Meta Link
Colt America L36
Acc: 7 DMG: 7P Mode: SA Ammo: 11c Regular Ammo x11
Colt America Spare Clip 11 rounds regular ammo
Colt America Spare Clip 11 rounds regular ammo
67 Rounds of Ammo
Knife
Acc: 5 Dmg: 5 AP: -1
Armor Vest
Glasses With Image Link
Mapsoft (campaign)
Standard Credstick: 3000 nuyen
20 Plastic Restraints
Flashlights
-1000 for Katana
Acc: 7 Reach: 1 Dmg: 7 AP: -3
-10000 for Chrysler-Nissan Jackrabbit
Chrysler-Nissan Jackrabbit
Handling: 4/3 Speed: 3 Accel: 2 Body: 8 Armor: 4 Seats: 2 Sensor 2:
-2000 for 4 months Squatter Lifestyle
Squatter (Sleep Tank) Lifestyle 4 months
Remaining Money - + ()
3000
-- Contacts –
Sensei (Kendo Instructor, Ex Runner, Retired): (Ill be damnned if I can figure out how Martial Arts works so he has Blades at 13) Loyalty: 4 Connection: 3
Fixer (See <- ): Loyalty: 1 Connection: 4
I know he seems broken but he is uh... a noob. Even more so then my Gunslinger Adept who had extensive training at least.
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What does the rest of your group look like?
What role do you see this guy having in a group?
I'm going to level with you - I get your backstory, but some of these dice pools are too low to be of any real use. A Con pool of 8 isn't going to get you far. A Negotiation pool of 6 is not likely to get you extra payout. Do you have any ware at all (I can't tell)? You're good at blades and etiquette and that's about it.
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Im just making him for fun really.
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How do you go from slave to corporate education?
You can't buy blades 7...if the modules get you to 7 that's fine but the karma portion still uses the regular rules which limits to 6.
Atzlan Spanish isn't a distinct language- it's Spanish with a central american dialect so Spanish(Atzlan) 3(+2) is more appropriate.
How does a janitor have friends in high places? I suppose you can know crime syndicate higher ups but not much else.
A skill can only have one specialization at chargen- parrying or swords, not both.
Aptitude positive quality allows a skill to go to 13- martial arts has nothing to do with it.
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How do you go from slave to corporate education?
You can't buy blades 7...if the modules get you to 7 that's fine but the karma portion still uses the regular rules which limits to 6.
Atzlan Spanish isn't a distinct language- it's Spanish with a central american dialect so Spanish(Atzlan) 3(+2) is more appropriate.
How does a janitor have friends in high places? I suppose you can know crime syndicate higher ups but not much else.
A skill can only have one specialization at chargen- parrying or swords, not both.
Aptitude positive quality allows a skill to go to 13- martial arts has nothing to do with it.
GAH! I FORGOT TO REMOVE FRIENDS FROM HIGH PLACES!