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Shadowrun Play => Character creation and critique => Topic started by: deathwishjoe on <03-21-11/0435:58>

Title: Dwaine "The Cowboy" Gromner. Rigger
Post by: deathwishjoe on <03-21-11/0435:58>

Name: Dwaine Gromner
Alias: "Cowboy"
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Nationality: UCAS
Lifestyle: Medium
Karma Spent: 0
Physical Description: 5'11" with dusty blonde hair.  He's only 24 years old but is starting to look closer to thirty due to his drug use and recent violent events resulting in several of his close freinds dying. 
Personality/background ADHD prone hyperactive person who knows a little bit about everything.  he talks a little too fast for his own good but not fast enough to keep up with his own mind sometimes.  If you couldn't see the lines just now starting to form around his eyes you think he was still 16 years old just before the crash 2.0 by the way he acted.   

Attributes

Body	Agility	Reaction	Strength
3	5	3(5)	2
Charisma	Intuition	Logic	Willpower
2	3	5(7)	2
Edge	Magic/Resonance	Essence	Initiative
3	N/A	1.590	8

Positive Qualities
Born Rich 10
Restricted Gear (Ratng 6 Response on the Hermes Ikon) 5
Black Market Pipeline Vehicles 10 (10% reduction in vehicle costs)
Black Market Pipeline 'Wares 10 (10% reduction in Wares cost)
Negative Qualities
SINer (standard) -5
Addiction (mild) to Stimulants -5
Allergy (Common Severe) to Soy -20
Oblivious (+1 to perception thresholds) -5

Active Skills

Cracking Skill Group	3
Electronics Skill Group	3
Dodge	3
Gunnery	2
Pistols	3
Throw	2
Automotive Mechanics	1
Industrial Mechanic	1
Armorer	1
Perception	3
Pilot Aircraft	2
Pilot Ground Craft	2
Forgery	1
First Aid	1

Knowledge Skills (30 free points)

Criminal (Seattle Gangs)	1
Matrix Hangouts	1
Underworld Politics	1
Matrix Security Procedures	1
Chemistry	1
History	1
Literature	1
Old Western Trids	1
Physics	1
Parazoology	1
Secrutiy Design	1
Street Drugs	1

Language Skills

English	N
Japanese	1
Cantonese	1
Mandarin	1
Russian	1

Cyber/Bioware

Cyberware	Essence	Cost	Notes
Used Control Rig	0.6	4,500¥	+2 Dice pool on vehicle tests when jumped into vehicle
Used Data Jack	0.12	225¥	don't need trodes and small amount of memory storage
Used Encephalon I	0.9	13,500¥	+1 dice to all Logic active skill tests
Used Math SPU	0.18	2,025¥	+2 dice to Mathematics or Electronic warefare tests
Used Hot Sim Module	0.24	2,250¥	Can run in hot sim
2 Used Auto-Injector (1 dose each)	0.24	450¥	Apply one Drug of your choice
Used Nanohive R2	1.2	9000¥	upkeeps 2 nanoware sysytems
Cerebral Boosters R2	0.4	18,000¥	+2 to logic
PuSHeD	0.1	13,500¥	+1 to all lagic based skill test
Rating 2 Reaction Enhancers	0.72	9000¥	+2 to Reaction Score

Gear (159,930¥)

Rating 3 Armor Program	1500¥
Rating 1 Attack Program Area 4	4000¥
Rating 6 Biofeedback Filter Program	6000¥
Rating 5 Black Hammer Program	5000¥
Rating 5 Corrupt Program	5000¥
Rating 5 Data Bomb program	5000¥
Rating 5 Decrypt Program	5000¥
Rating 5 Exploit Program w/ Mute Option	5300¥
Rating 4 Medic Program	4000¥
Rating 6 Nuke Program	6000¥
Rating 5 Sniffer Program	5000¥
Rating 6 Spoof Program	6000¥
Rating 6 Stealth Program	6000¥
Rating 5 Track Program	5000¥
Rating 6 ECCM Program	6000¥
Rating 6 Analyze Program	600¥
Rating 6 Browse Program	600¥
Rating 6 Command Program	600¥
Rating 6 Edit Program	600¥
Rating 6 Encrypt Program	600¥
Rating 6 Purge With Viral Resistence 6 Program	1200¥
Rating 6 Reality Filter Program	600¥
Rating 6 Scan Program	600¥
Rating 3 Facial Recognition Program	600¥
Hermes Ikon Rating 6 Signal 5 (customized Interface, Optimized for Exploit)	10600¥
NovaTech Navi Firewall 6 System 6	4900¥
Rating 2 Virus "Swiss Cheese"	2000¥
Rating 2 Virus "Pacifist"	2000¥
Rating 2 Worm "Cavelry"	4000¥
MetaLink Comlink Response 1 Signal 2 (loaded with fake SIN)	100¥
Rating 3 Unrestricted Agent "Deputy"	3600¥
MSP Premium Services 1 Month	500¥
10 Disposable Commcodes	100¥
AR Gloves	250¥
Subvocal Microphone	50¥
Rating 3 Neural Amplifiers (Limbic)	15,000¥
Rating 3 Neural Amplifiers (Neocortical)	15,000¥
10 Hits of Jazz	750¥
10 Hits of Cram	100¥
10 Hits of Betameth	200¥
4 Hits of Long Haul	200¥
Streetline Special SS 4P 6c	100¥
Ares Predator IV SA 5P -1 AP 15c Smartgun	350¥
Ares Viper Slivergun 8P(F) +2 SA/BF 30c Smartgun Extrernal Underbarel	900¥
5 Flash-Bang Grenades	150¥
5 Fragmentation Grenades	175¥
2000 Rounds of Stick-n-shockrounds 600/1400 Predator/HVAR	1600¥
250 Flechet Rounds Sliver	250¥
5000 Regular Ammo 500/1000/1000/500 SS/Predator/HVAR/Desert	1000¥
1300 EX-Explosive Ammo 520/520/260 Predator/HVAR/Desert	1300¥
Concealable Holster	75¥
Quick Draw Holster	100¥
21 Spare clips (5 per pistol)	105¥
4 Tool Kits Hardware, Automotive, Industrial, Armorer	2000¥
Rating 4 Drivers liscence	400¥
Rating 4 Commercial Drivers Liscence	400¥
3 Rating 4 Weapon Permits	1200¥
Rating 3 Fake SIN (Barry Sanders)	3000¥
Rating 6 Medkit	600¥
100 Plastic Security Restraints	10¥
Rating 6 Goggles W/ Flare Comp., Image Link, Smart Link, Thermo, R3 Vision Enhance, Vision Magnification	1375¥
Rating 2 Ear Buds R3 Audi Enhance, Select Soud Filter	520¥
Half Body Suit Form Fitting Armor B:4/I:1	900¥
Actioneer Business Clothes B:5/I:3	1500¥
Lined Coat with YNT softweave Armor B:6/I:4	770¥
Morphing Liscence Plate	1000¥

Vehicles
"Jesse James" Used Hyundai Shin-Hyung

Handling	Accel	Speed	Pilot	Body	Armor	Sensor	Availability	Cost
2	20/45	128	1	10	20	1	4	26800¥

Engine Cust (acc), Run Flat Tires, 2 Done Racks (Small), GridLink Override, Nitrous Injection, Pimped Ride Level 1, Ram Plate, Rigger Adaptation, Smuggling Compartment Sheilded


"Annie Oakley" Renraku Stormcloud

Handling	Accel	Speed	Pilot	Body	Armor	Sensor	Availability	Cost
-3	5/10	30	3	3	3	6	8	19310¥

Engine Speed Customized, External Fixed Remote Ammo bin Ares Desert Strike, R4 Targeting, R4 Electronic warefare, R4 Clearsight, R4 Covert Ops.

"Doc Holiday" MCT Nissan Roto-drone Handling Accel Speed Pilot Body Armor Sensor Availability Cost 0 8/20 80 4 3 6 6 12 16360¥ Mount external Fixed Remote Ares HVAR targeting 3, Defense 3, Electronic warefare 4 "Billy 'The Kid'" Cyberspace Designs Dragon Fly Handling Accel Speed Pilot Body Armor Sensor Availability Cost 1 3/15 30 3 1 1 2 12 2250¥ 5p vs mini drones, 1P +1 AP vs. Others, Electronic warefare 4 "Butch Cassedy" Shiawase Kanmushi Handling Accel Speed Pilot Body Armor Sensor Availability Cost 1 2/10 10 3 0 0 1 8 900¥ Contacts Contact C/L Pete "Tricky" Gomez (Fixer) 4/1 Dr. Isaiah Brown (Street Doctor) 1/1 "Kitten" (joygirl) 1/1 "mYsTiC" (Pirated Warez Site Admin) 3/1 Build Point totals: 400 = 170 (stats) + 10 (edge) + 148 (Active Skills) + 60 (Resources) + 12 (Contacts) + 35 (Positive Qualities) - 35 (Negative Qualities)

Title: Re: Dwaine "The Cowboy" Gromner. Rigger
Post by: deathwishjoe on <03-22-11/2316:32>

So Im thinking about making the following changes.

Dropping the duke.  the more I think about it the more conspicous a bus feels.
adding the large drone rack, a ram plate and sheilded smuggling compartment and 10 more armor to "Jesse James"
using some of the money saved to add R2 used reaction enhancers
Drop Exploit by one and add the mute option (trick I saw done by Kontact)
Add the corrupt program to my list of softwares along with some facial recognition software
spend rest of money on response enhancers
Drop STR by one and ether Cha or edge by 1
add 2 throw and 3 to dodge

Thoughts?

Title: Re: Dwaine "The Cowboy" Gromner. Rigger
Post by: Angelone on <03-23-11/2145:55>

Maybe trade "The Duke" for a Rover '68.
I'd keep the edge where it is.

I'm away from book so I con't be much help right now, the build looks solid though.