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Title: Ork Tough
Post by: ydirbut on <07-18-11/1716:00>
My character's is mostly set in stone, so I'm mainly looking for things I should spend karma on to advance. I'm thinking of getting specializations first, because they seem cheap for their karma cost.

Willis Shearwater is broke. Like, barely a dime in his name broke.
That’s why he’s looking for work with one of his father’s old friends,
a small time fixer. His father died last year, but they hadn’t spoken
in almost 7 years before that, since he left to join a street gang
when he was 14. But that’s in the past, and hopefully it will remain
that way. Also in the past are his drug problems. A particularly nasty
episode with BTLs left him in a coma for almost a month, and still
affects him to some degree, mainly nausea while in simsense.

        He’s done some small time work before for some local unsavory sorts,
mainly intimidation and guard duty, but nothing serious. He knows his
way around with his fists and with a gun, though. He also knows his
way around the Barrens, where he grew up. He spends a lot of time
working out and at the range.

== Info ==
Street Name: Willis Shearwater
Name: Willis Shearwater
Karma: 0
Street Cred: 0
Notoriety: 0
Public Awareness: 0
Ork M Age 22
Height 190 CM Weight 120 KG
Composure: 5
Judge Intentions: 7
Lift/Carry: 14 (90 kg/60 kg)
Memory: 4
Nuyen: 250

== Attributes ==
BOD: 8
AGI: 4
REA: 4
STR: 6
CHA: 3
INT: 4
LOG: 2
WIL: 2
EDG: 2

== Derived Attributes ==
Essence:                   5.8
Initiative:                8
IP:                        1
Matrix Initiative:         5
Matrix IP:                 1
Physical Damage Track:     12
Stun Damage Track:         9

== Active Skills ==
Animal Handling            : 0                      Pool: 3
Animal Training            : 0                      Pool: 3
Archery                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Armorer                    : 1                      Pool: 3
Artisan                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Automatics                 : 4                      Pool: 8
Blades                     : 4                      Pool: 8
Climbing                   : 4                      Pool: 10
Clubs                      : 4                      Pool: 8
Computer                   : 1                      Pool: 3
Con                        : 1                      Pool: 4
Cybercombat                : 0                      Pool: 1
Data Search                : 1                      Pool: 3
Demolitions                : 0                      Pool: 1
Disguise                   : 0                      Pool: 3
Diving                     : 0                      Pool: 7
Dodge                      : 0                      Pool: 3
Escape Artist              : 0                      Pool: 3
Etiquette                  : 1                      Pool: 4
First Aid                  : 0                      Pool: 1
Flight                     : 4                      Pool: 10
Forgery                    : 1                      Pool: 5
Gunnery                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Gymnastics                 : 4                      Pool: 8
Hacking                    : 0                      Pool: 1
Hardware                   : 1                      Pool: 3
Heavy Weapons              : 0                      Pool: 3
Industrial Mechanic        : 1                      Pool: 3
Infiltration               : 0                      Pool: 3
Instruction                : 0                      Pool: 2
Intimidation               : 3                      Pool: 6
Leadership                 : 1                      Pool: 4
Locksmith                  : 0                      Pool: 3
Longarms                   : 4                      Pool: 8
Navigation                 : 0                      Pool: 3
Negotiation                : 1                      Pool: 4
Palming                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Parachuting                : 0                      Pool: 7
Perception                 : 6                      Pool: 10
Pilot Ground Craft         : 0                      Pool: 3
Pilot Watercraft           : 0                      Pool: 3
Pistols                    : 4                      Pool: 8
Riding                     : 0                      Pool: 3
Running                    : 4                      Pool: 10
Shadowing                  : 0                      Pool: 3
Software                   : 1                      Pool: 3
Survival                   : 0                      Pool: 1
Swimming                   : 4                      Pool: 10
Throwing Weapons           : 0                      Pool: 3
Tracking                   : 0                      Pool: 3
Unarmed Combat             : 4                      Pool: 8

== Knowledge Skills ==
Football                   : 2                      Pool: 6
Guns                       : 1                      Pool: 5
Machining                  : 2                      Pool: 4
Spanish                    : 4                      Pool: 8
Street Drugs               : 2 [BTLS]               Pool: 6 (8)
The Barrens                : 6                      Pool: 10

== Contacts ==
Forger (3, 1)

== Qualities ==
Bad Luck
Home Ground (The Barrens)
Scorched
Simsense Vertigo

== Cyberware/Bioware ==
Sim Module (Hot-Sim Modified)

== Armor ==
Armor Jacket              8/6

== Weapons ==
Ares Viper Slivergun
   +Sound Suppressor
   DV: 8P(f)   AP: +5   RC: 0
Club
   DV: 4P   AP: -   RC: 0
Survival Knife
   DV: 4P   AP: -1   RC: 0
Unarmed Attack
   DV: 3S   AP: -   RC: 0

== Commlink ==
Meta Link (1, 1, 1, 2)
   +Vector Xim

== Gear ==
Ammo: Flechette Rounds (Heavy Pistols) x90
Biomonitor
Concealable Holster
Datachip x5
Fake License (Johnanthon Parbor) Rating 4
Fake SIN (Johnathon Parbor) Rating 4
Flashlight
Jazz x5
Respirator Rating 1
Survival Kit
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: ydirbut on <07-18-11/1724:52>
Also, does simsense vertigo prevent you from using smartlinks?
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Onion Man on <07-18-11/1734:30>
Also, does simsense vertigo prevent you from using smartlinks?

It does.  Just put it on my newest magician build.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: ydirbut on <07-18-11/1745:20>
OK, that's what I thought.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: eshoup1 on <07-18-11/1825:13>
Personally, I would spend my karma on working on raising willpower. I don't think I have ever made a character with less than a 3 in willpower.
I am a big fan of having as many boxes of stun damage as possible.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: baronspam on <07-18-11/1847:16>
Without critiquing the existing character, raise Edge.  Its so bloody usefull.  I hate to start with less than 3, and even then I want more. 

Specializations are a bargain post char gen.  Two karma for two extra dice.  Many people suggest not taking specializations at all at initial character creation because they are so cheap to pick up during play.  The exception I think is the skill that you took at 1 or 2 to keep it cheap and then took a specalization to make it useful, only really intending to use the specialization aspect- something like Hardware 1 (maglocks +2).  You really don't intend to touch a piece of hardware other than a maglock, so its reasonable to have that up and going when you start.  But if you are buying longarms 4 the sniper rifle+2 can wait until after the first run.  Two karma is peanuts.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: ydirbut on <07-18-11/1851:49>
Personally, I would spend my karma on working on raising willpower. I don't think I have ever made a character with less than a 3 in willpower.
I am a big fan of having as many boxes of stun damage as possible.
The reason I gave him a low willpower is that I imagine him as having somewhat of an addictive personality, not very much self-restraint, etc. Is it that big of a malus to have a low willlpower? I've never played SR before, so I don't know.


Without critiquing the existing character, raise Edge.  Its so bloody usefull.  I hate to start with less than 3, and even then I want more. 

Specializations are a bargain post char gen.  Two karma for two extra dice.  Many people suggest not taking specializations at all at initial character creation because they are so cheap to pick up during play.  The exception I think is the skill that you took at 1 or 2 to keep it cheap and then took a specalization to make it useful, only really intending to use the specialization aspect- something like Hardware 1 (maglocks +2).  You really don't intend to touch a piece of hardware other than a maglock, so its reasonable to have that up and going when you start.  But if you are buying longarms 4 the sniper rifle+2 can wait until after the first run.  Two karma is peanuts.
Yeah, I'd really like to pick up some more edge, but I don't know where I would get the points.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Seeker on <07-18-11/2235:12>
The reason I gave him a low willpower is that I imagine him as having somewhat of an addictive personality, not very much self-restraint, etc. Is it that big of a malus to have a low willlpower? I've never played SR before, so I don't know.

Basically you'll run into an issue of a low Stun track.  Heavy armor and a low stun track finds you unconscious long before a bullet even breaks through.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: ydirbut on <07-18-11/2357:00>
== Info ==
Street Name: Willis Shearwater
Name: Willis Shearwater
Karma: 0
Street Cred: 0
Notoriety: 0
Public Awareness: 0
Ork M Age 22
Height 190 CM Weight 120 KG
Composure: 5
Judge Intentions: 6
Lift/Carry: 14 (90 kg/60 kg)
Memory: 5
Nuyen: 0

== Attributes ==
BOD: 8
AGI: 4
REA: 4
STR: 6
CHA: 2
INT: 4
LOG: 2
WIL: 3
EDG: 4

== Derived Attributes ==
Essence:                   5.8
Initiative:                8
IP:                        1
Matrix Initiative:         5
Matrix IP:                 1
Physical Damage Track:     12
Stun Damage Track:         10

== Active Skills ==
Animal Handling            : 0                      Pool: 3
Animal Training            : 0                      Pool: 3
Archery                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Armorer                    : 1                      Pool: 3
Artisan                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Automatics                 : 4                      Pool: 8
Blades                     : 4                      Pool: 8
Climbing                   : 4                      Pool: 10
Clubs                      : 4                      Pool: 8
Computer                   : 0                      Pool: 1
Con                        : 0                      Pool: 1
Cybercombat                : 0                      Pool: 1
Data Search                : 0                      Pool: 1
Demolitions                : 0                      Pool: 1
Disguise                   : 0                      Pool: 3
Diving                     : 0                      Pool: 7
Dodge                      : 0                      Pool: 3
Escape Artist              : 0                      Pool: 3
Etiquette                  : 0                      Pool: 1
First Aid                  : 0                      Pool: 1
Flight                     : 4                      Pool: 10
Forgery                    : 1                      Pool: 5
Gunnery                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Gymnastics                 : 4                      Pool: 8
Hacking                    : 0                      Pool: 1
Heavy Weapons              : 0                      Pool: 3
Infiltration               : 0                      Pool: 3
Instruction                : 0                      Pool: 1
Intimidation               : 4                      Pool: 6
Leadership                 : 0                      Pool: 1
Locksmith                  : 0                      Pool: 3
Longarms                   : 4                      Pool: 8
Navigation                 : 0                      Pool: 3
Negotiation                : 0                      Pool: 1
Palming                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Parachuting                : 0                      Pool: 7
Perception                 : 6                      Pool: 10
Pilot Ground Craft         : 0                      Pool: 3
Pilot Watercraft           : 0                      Pool: 3
Pistols                    : 4                      Pool: 8
Riding                     : 0                      Pool: 3
Running                    : 4                      Pool: 10
Shadowing                  : 0                      Pool: 3
Survival                   : 0                      Pool: 2
Swimming                   : 4                      Pool: 10
Throwing Weapons           : 0                      Pool: 3
Tracking                   : 0                      Pool: 3
Unarmed Combat             : 4                      Pool: 8

== Knowledge Skills ==
Football                   : 2                      Pool: 6
Guns                       : 1                      Pool: 5
Spanish                    : 4                      Pool: 8
Street Drugs               : 2 [BTLS]               Pool: 6 (8)
The Barrens                : 6                      Pool: 10
Welding                    : 2                      Pool: 4

== Contacts ==
Gun Dealer (3, 1)

== Qualities ==
Dependent (Inconvenience)
Home Ground (The Barrens)
Poor Self Control (Vindictive)
Scorched
Simsense Vertigo

== Cyberware/Bioware ==
Sim Module (Hot-Sim Modified)

== Armor ==
Armor Jacket              8/6

== Weapons ==
Ares Viper Slivergun
   +Sound Suppressor
   DV: 8P(f)   AP: +5   RC: 0
Club
   DV: 4P   AP: -   RC: 0
Survival Knife
   DV: 4P   AP: -1   RC: 0
Unarmed Attack
   DV: 3S   AP: -   RC: 0

== Commlink ==
Meta Link (1, 1, 1, 2)
   +Vector Xim

== Gear ==
Ammo: Flechette Rounds (Heavy Pistols) x90
Biomonitor
Concealable Holster
Datachip x5
Fake License (Johnanthon Parbor) Rating 4
Fake SIN (Johnathon Parbor) Rating 4
Flashlight
Jazz x5
Respirator Rating 1
Survival Kit

Alright, so I modified it somewhat. The main changes:
Cha to 2, Willpower to three
Dropped Electronics and Influence 1 for another two point of edge. Rearranged skill points and negative qualities.

However, now I'm worried that my character is overly two-dimensional and focused on combat.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: UmaroVI on <07-19-11/0627:23>
I think you have too many different ways of hitting people. You're heavily invested in knowing a whoooole lot of different ways of rolling Agility+Skill to do damage; I would suggest you're better off knowing a few ways of doing that and having other skills.

I would drop all your melee skills but Unarmed, and get yourself a Shock Glove.

Longarms are worthless and I would drop those. I would consider pistols, or pistols+automatics, or automatics, or pistols+heavy weapons.

On a further note: what are you trying to do? You're an unaugmented mundane who's fairly focused on combat. Why?

Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: UmaroVI on <07-19-11/0628:42>
As a side note, the Slivergun is a very bad weapon, please get a better one.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: ydirbut on <07-19-11/1326:21>
I think you have too many different ways of hitting people. You're heavily invested in knowing a whoooole lot of different ways of rolling Agility+Skill to do damage; I would suggest you're better off knowing a few ways of doing that and having other skills.

I would drop all your melee skills but Unarmed, and get yourself a Shock Glove.

Longarms are worthless and I would drop those. I would consider pistols, or pistols+automatics, or automatics, or pistols+heavy weapons.
I just think its weird and unrealistic to have a character that is an expert in one type of gun and totally unfamiliar with other types of weaponry, or a guy who could kill somebody with his bare hands, but has no incentive to use any sort of weaponry because he doesn't have skill in it.

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On a further note: what are you trying to do? You're an unaugmented mundane who's fairly focused on combat. Why?
Well, the whole concept is that he's broke, and has been poor his entire life. I plan on buying cyberware as he gets nuyen though.

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As a side note, the Slivergun is a very bad weapon, please get a better one.
Is it? I didn't realize the AP penalty was that severe.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Tsuzua on <07-19-11/1346:38>
I just think its weird and unrealistic to have a character that is an expert in one type of gun and totally unfamiliar with other types of weaponry, or a guy who could kill somebody with his bare hands, but has no incentive to use any sort of weaponry because he doesn't have skill in it.

Welcome to shadowrun and the failure that is the skill group.  It was suppose to stop this sort of oddness, but it really didn't do a good job of it expect of several limited cases. 

As for the slivergun, it's more that it limits your options.  A Fubiki is a better gun.  It's better at burst firing (less recoil comp needed) and can take a selection of rounds *coughstickandshockscough*.  Or you can also start with two guns, a nice light pistol for conceal jobs and a HK227-X (or AK-97) for heavier fights. 

Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: baronspam on <07-19-11/1457:58>
Longarms are worthless and I would drop those. I would consider pistols, or pistols+automatics, or automatics, or pistols+heavy weapons.

 

I wouldn't call longarms worthless.  They are situational, and less likely to come up in a typcial street fight, but the ability to stick someone on a roof/in a window/in the brush with a sniper rifle in a situation where you can pick and prepare the battlefield is most certainly useful.  I don't think I would recomend them an a hyper-specalization to the exclusion of all else, but having someone in the group that can reach out and touch someone from long range is an asset.  And you can always pack a shotgun for close work.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Seeker on <07-19-11/1525:25>
Heh.  Made a dwarf once with a super high shotgun ability, and then made him ultra sneaky too.  Then I put him in clown paint.  It was quite possibly the scariest thing ever.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: UmaroVI on <07-19-11/1527:18>
Longarms pretty much are that bad - you're better off sniping with assault cannons than with sniper rifles - same Concealment (none), same Legality (F), same max range, better damage, better armor penetration.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Shinobi Killfist on <07-19-11/1534:23>
I just think its weird and unrealistic to have a character that is an expert in one type of gun and totally unfamiliar with other types of weaponry, or a guy who could kill somebody with his bare hands, but has no incentive to use any sort of weaponry because he doesn't have skill in it.


I agree, sadly they did a crap job of implementing skill groups.  Heck I think they did a crap job on how they broke down the skill lists.  If Etiquette covers all forms of it from gangs, to high society a Gun skill could just be a gun skill and rely on specialization to cover it.  If you know how to use pistols chances are you are better with a SMG than someone who has never picked up a gun.

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Is it? I didn't realize the AP penalty was that severe.


There are better guns, but it is a perfectly fine gun.  It has a high base damage that more than makes up for its bad AP, the burst fire with a sound suppressor built in is just gravy. It is the most expensive hand gun in the base book so it might not fit the poor street tough thing to well though.   
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Shinobi Killfist on <07-19-11/1536:19>
Longarms pretty much are that bad - you're better off sniping with assault cannons than with sniper rifles - same Concealment (none), same Legality (F), same max range, better damage, better armor penetration.

You can break down some sniper rifles and long arms includes more normal rifles and shotguns. 
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Ethan on <07-19-11/1547:10>
Battle Rifles are actually superior to most Sniper Rifles (unmodified). Sure, Sniper Rifles are usually 8DV and -2 or -3, but require hefty modifications to fire in Burst or Full Auto.

The skill groups are odd, Etiquette and Gymnastics as skills cover a wide, wide range of things while weapons which should share some common ground have no interplay.

Gun suggestions:
- Ares Predator IV: Cliche but extremely useful. Slap on a Personalized Grip and a Skinlink as modifications and a Silencer accessory and you're golden.
- Ruger Super Warhawk: Same thing as above, it's even cheap enough to handle an internal smartlink (though no Silencers).

The Slivergun is useful for one thing: Modifying for Full Auto and providing Suppressive Fire. You can even add in an Additional Clip mod if you wanted to, so you could Suppressive Fire for two rounds with only switching to the second ammo clip in between. It's my Anti-Ghoul Gun (though it usually just pisses them off).

I respect the Longarms choice, but there aren't enough Shotgun varieties to put it to good use.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Tsuzua on <07-19-11/1549:07>
I wouldn't call longarms worthless.  They are situational, and less likely to come up in a typcial street fight, but the ability to stick someone on a roof/in a window/in the brush with a sniper rifle in a situation where you can pick and prepare the battlefield is most certainly useful.  I don't think I would recomend them an a hyper-specalization to the exclusion of all else, but having someone in the group that can reach out and touch someone from long range is an asset.  And you can always pack a shotgun for close work.


Unfortunately, they are.  There's really only two good situations that longarms can do over automatics (ignoring battle rifles).  Those are hitting people >550 meters away and breaking though high armor vehicles.  Everywhere else, you're usually better with FA SnS fire (especially HV!) unless you can be very sure with hitting with your called shots (then you burst fire).  The Barrett 121 can admittedly almost hold its own.  Nearly everything else is blown away by an AK-97 much less something like an Alpha.

But in their "niche" the panther assault cannon is better at doing more damage with roughly the same effective range.  The errataed(?) gauss rifle is even better than that.  And the skill to use those also lets you use grenade launchers and heavy machine guns (and rockets if they didn't suck). 

On a related note, you are using skill groups right?  I believe you are based on your skills, but if not, use them.

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Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: squee_nabob on <07-19-11/1637:07>
I wish shotguns were the best at something, anything. I want to build a character who uses a shotgun very badly (I want to do this badly, not that he would be bad at using a shotgun), but every time I try to I remember that Automatics, Heavy Weapons, and Pistols are just better.

Shocklock rounds are unique to shotguns, but that’s for an underbarrel on an assault rifle, because locks don’t tend to dodge.

As far as the character goes, I think you need less ways to kill people, and be better at killing them in one particular way. Being too broad in your kill-ability tends to leave you rather weak at it.

Also, why Respirator 1? That seems like a weird level to buy it at.

There are better heavy pistols than the sliver gun. If you want a breakdown I performed a mass comparison of all guns in Shadowrun (excluding Gun Haven) and can give you some suggestions.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: ydirbut on <07-19-11/1651:22>
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There are better guns, but it is a perfectly fine gun.  It has a high base damage that more than makes up for its bad AP, the burst fire with a sound suppressor built in is just gravy. It is the most expensive hand gun in the base book so it might not fit the poor street tough thing to well though.   
hmm, I didn't notice that. I'll have to switch it out for a manhunter or something.

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On a related note, you are using skill groups right?  I believe you are based on your skills, but if not, use them.
What do you mean?

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Also, why Respirator 1? That seems like a weird level to buy it at.
Good question. I'm not certain how that got in there.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Shinobi Killfist on <07-19-11/1709:19>
I actually dug the respirator 1, I thought it fit as something like every day gear for living in a dystopian future.  I wish things like this worked more like automatic successes vs inhalation vectors and not bonus dice though.  A respirator 6 should just stop a lot of toxins., but really its just 2 more hits
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Tsuzua on <07-19-11/2336:46>
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On a related note, you are using skill groups right?  I believe you are based on your skills, but if not, use them.
What do you mean?

I mean are you buying skill groups?  Because it looks like you have Firearms 4 & Close Combat 4.  I just was making sure that was the case and you weren't buying them individually.  If not, you should buy those groups instead and save yourself some points.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: ydirbut on <07-20-11/1559:52>
Alright, new version of the character:

== Info ==
Street Name: Willis Shearwater
Name: Willis Shearwater
Karma: 0
Street Cred: 0
Notoriety: 0
Public Awareness: 0
Ork M Age 22
Height 190 CM Weight 120 KG
Composure: 5
Judge Intentions: 6
Lift/Carry: 14 (90 kg/60 kg)
Memory: 5
Nuyen: 0

== Attributes ==
BOD: 8
AGI: 4
REA: 4
STR: 6
CHA: 2
INT: 4
LOG: 2
WIL: 3
EDG: 5

== Derived Attributes ==
Essence:                   5.8
Initiative:                8
IP:                        1
Matrix Initiative:         5
Matrix IP:                 1
Physical Damage Track:     12
Stun Damage Track:         10

== Active Skills ==
Animal Handling            : 0                      Pool: 3
Animal Training            : 0                      Pool: 3
Archery                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Armorer                    : 0                      Pool: 1
Artisan                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Automatics                 : 4                      Pool: 8
Blades                     : 0                      Pool: 3
Climbing                   : 4                      Pool: 10
Clubs                      : 0                      Pool: 3
Computer                   : 0                      Pool: 1
Con                        : 1                      Pool: 3
Cybercombat                : 0                      Pool: 1
Data Search                : 4                      Pool: 6
Demolitions                : 0                      Pool: 1
Disguise                   : 0                      Pool: 3
Diving                     : 0                      Pool: 7
Dodge                      : 0                      Pool: 3
Escape Artist              : 0                      Pool: 3
Etiquette                  : 0                      Pool: 1
First Aid                  : 0                      Pool: 1
Flight                     : 4                      Pool: 10
Forgery                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Gunnery                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Gymnastics                 : 4                      Pool: 8
Hacking                    : 0                      Pool: 1
Heavy Weapons              : 0                      Pool: 3
Infiltration               : 0                      Pool: 3
Instruction                : 0                      Pool: 1
Intimidation               : 4                      Pool: 6
Leadership                 : 0                      Pool: 1
Locksmith                  : 0                      Pool: 3
Longarms                   : 0                      Pool: 3
Navigation                 : 0                      Pool: 3
Negotiation                : 0                      Pool: 1
Palming                    : 0                      Pool: 3
Parachuting                : 0                      Pool: 7
Perception                 : 4                      Pool: 8
Pilot Ground Craft         : 0                      Pool: 3
Pilot Watercraft           : 0                      Pool: 3
Pistols                    : 4                      Pool: 8
Riding                     : 0                      Pool: 3
Running                    : 4                      Pool: 10
Shadowing                  : 0                      Pool: 3
Survival                   : 0                      Pool: 2
Swimming                   : 4                      Pool: 10
Throwing Weapons           : 0                      Pool: 3
Tracking                   : 0                      Pool: 3
Unarmed Combat             : 6                      Pool: 10

== Knowledge Skills ==
Football                   : 2                      Pool: 6
Guns                       : 1                      Pool: 5
Seattle Street Gangs       : 2                      Pool: 4
Spanish                    : 4                      Pool: 8
Street Drugs               : 2 [BTLS]               Pool: 6 (8)
The Barrens                : 6                      Pool: 10

== Contacts ==
Gun Dealer (4, 4)

== Qualities ==
Dependent (Inconvenience)
Home Ground (The Barrens)
Poor Self Control (Vindictive)
Scorched
Simsense Vertigo

== Cyberware/Bioware ==
Sim Module (Hot-Sim Modified)

== Armor ==
Armor Jacket              8/6

== Weapons ==
Colt Manhunter
   +Laser Sight
   DV: 5P   AP: -1   RC: 0
Unarmed Attack
   DV: 3S   AP: -   RC: 0

== Commlink ==
Meta Link (1, 1, 1, 2)
   +Vector Xim

== Gear ==
Ammo: Flechette Rounds (Heavy Pistols) x90
Biomonitor
Concealable Holster
Datachip x5
Fake License (Johnanthon Parbor) Rating 4
Fake SIN (Johnathon Parbor) Rating 4
Flashlight
Jazz x5
Survival Kit


Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: FastJack on <07-20-11/1625:23>
Holy crap! When did we get a spoiler tag??

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Uh... I mean, how do you guys like the spoiler tag? ;D
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Critias on <07-20-11/1629:37>
Note to self:  Play poker with FastJack.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: FastJack on <07-20-11/1644:11>
Note to self:  Play poker with FastJack.
Got any twos?
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: UmaroVI on <07-20-11/1707:11>
Looks much improved - let me go through more carefully.

What is the "Flight" skill and why do you have it at 4? Is that supposed to be Pilot Aircraft (and why does he have that)?

Infiltration is very handy and it would be good to have at least 1 point in it so you can sneak around.

Consider knowledge of Urban Brawl rather than Football; in SR, Urban Brawl has sort of replaced pro football.

Consider speaking Or'zet instead of or in addition to Spanish.

Rating 4 fake SIN is Availability 12. I can't remember if it was you or someone else who wanted availability at most 8, though.

You've got a very high body of 8 - I would strongly consider 7 body and 5 reaction. You don't lose a condition monitor point since it rounds up, and an extra dodge dice is about as good as an extra soak dice. You're not wearing enough armor to care about the encumbrance, and more initiative is always good.

On the topic of armor: why not have a regular helmet? It's only 100Y and +1/+2 armor. Sure, it's not always appropriate, but it can't hurt to own and it's cheap.

Form fitting body armor and SecureTech PPP Systems, also gel packs, would all help you. If you don't start with them, consider buying them with earned nuyen.

Back to complaining about guns: you do have a 4/4 Gun Dealer as your contact, and you're a criminal; I don't think it's unreasonable to have a decently nice gun at character creation and it actually seems a bit weird that a guy with lots of skill in firearms, a gun dealer as a close friend, and an interest in guns only owns one cheap gun. Let me suggest the following; I'm trying to stick with stuff that's more on the cheap side. I'm also assuming you play by Pretend Stick and Shock Doesn't Exist rules.

1550: Ruger Thunderbolt (750) with the mod (not accessory!) Gas-Vent 2 (400) and the internal smartgun option (400). With the 1 recoil compensation for 6 strength, you can fire 2 narrow bursts per IP with no penalty. It's the gun Lone Star likes, so it's also quite believable it could have "fallen off the back of the truck" and ended up in your hands.

2275: Ares Alpha (1700), with a shock pad (50), Gas-vent 3 accessory (400), personalized grip (100), Underbarrel Weight (25). While fairly expensive, this is a gun that a discerning shadowrunner who doesn't want a gyrostabilizer or cyberlimbs uses, and it's actually quite cost-efficient. With your 6 Strength, it has an impressive 9 recoil compensation, letting you long/short or full burst with no penalty.

This gives you a smallish gun you can carry around and a bigger gun for when you don't care if you look obviously armed. Ammo-wise, Flechette ammunition is not good except against people with no armor at all - Ex-ex costs the same and is better, Ex ammo costs half as much and is better, APDS ammo costs less and is better (but 16F).
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: ydirbut on <07-20-11/1842:09>
Thanks for the help!

Looks much improved - let me go through more carefully.

What is the "Flight" skill and why do you have it at 4? Is that supposed to be Pilot Aircraft (and why does he have that)?
Part of the Athletics skill group, I believe.

Consider knowledge of Urban Brawl rather than Football; in SR, Urban Brawl has sort of replaced pro football.
Isn't football still around though?

You've got a very high body of 8 - I would strongly consider 7 body and 5 reaction. You don't lose a condition monitor point since it rounds up, and an extra dodge dice is about as good as an extra soak dice. You're not wearing enough armor to care about the encumbrance, and more initiative is always good.
Hmm, that might work. Actually I kind of like that- a lifetime of living on the razors edge has honed his reflexes.

Form fitting body armor and SecureTech PPP Systems, also gel packs, would all help you. If you don't start with them, consider buying them with earned nuyen.
What books are those from? I only have access to Arsenal, Runners Companion, and the core book.

Back to complaining about guns: you do have a 4/4 Gun Dealer as your contact, and you're a criminal; I don't think it's unreasonable to have a decently nice gun at character creation and it actually seems a bit weird that a guy with lots of skill in firearms, a gun dealer as a close friend, and an interest in guns only owns one cheap gun. Let me suggest the following; I'm trying to stick with stuff that's more on the cheap side. I'm also assuming you play by Pretend Stick and Shock Doesn't Exist rules.
Good point. As far as stick-n-shock is concerned, I'm not planning on using them because I think they are cheezy, but I don't think they have been explicitly banned by the GM.

1550: Ruger Thunderbolt (750) with the mod (not accessory!) Gas-Vent 2 (400) and the internal smartgun option (400). With the 1 recoil compensation for 6 strength, you can fire 2 narrow bursts per IP with no penalty. It's the gun Lone Star likes, so it's also quite believable it could have "fallen off the back of the truck" and ended up in your hands.
My character can't use smartlinks on account of the simsense vertigo. Also, why is having the mod rather than the accessory desirable?

Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: UmaroVI on <07-20-11/1935:07>

Consider knowledge of Urban Brawl rather than Football; in SR, Urban Brawl has sort of replaced pro football.
Isn't football still around though?
Yes, but it's not nearly as popular and much less likely for a barrens-dwelling criminal to follow.

Form fitting body armor and SecureTech PPP Systems, also gel packs, would all help you. If you don't start with them, consider buying them with earned nuyen.
What books are those from? I only have access to Arsenal, Runners Companion, and the core book.
Arsenal.


Back to complaining about guns: you do have a 4/4 Gun Dealer as your contact, and you're a criminal; I don't think it's unreasonable to have a decently nice gun at character creation and it actually seems a bit weird that a guy with lots of skill in firearms, a gun dealer as a close friend, and an interest in guns only owns one cheap gun. Let me suggest the following; I'm trying to stick with stuff that's more on the cheap side. I'm also assuming you play by Pretend Stick and Shock Doesn't Exist rules.
Good point. As far as stick-n-shock is concerned, I'm not planning on using them because I think they are cheezy, but I don't think they have been explicitly banned by the GM.
That's what I call the "Pretend Stick and Shock Doesn't Exist" rules - it's not explicitly banned but nobody touches them.


1550: Ruger Thunderbolt (750) with the mod (not accessory!) Gas-Vent 2 (400) and the internal smartgun option (400). With the 1 recoil compensation for 6 strength, you can fire 2 narrow bursts per IP with no penalty. It's the gun Lone Star likes, so it's also quite believable it could have "fallen off the back of the truck" and ended up in your hands.
My character can't use smartlinks on account of the simsense vertigo. Also, why is having the mod rather than the accessory desirable?

The gas vent accessory can't be attached to pistols, but you can mod them to have integral gas-vents.

I forgot about the simsense vertigo thing. Get yourself Tracer Rounds for the assault rifle or any other full auto weapon you use, remove both smartlinks, and put a Laser Sight on both.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: UmaroVI on <07-21-11/0838:35>
Well, crap. I was totally wrong about that - you can't mod gas vent systems onto pistols either. My bad. You should replace that with Personalized Grip (100 nuyen) and Underbarrel Weight (25 nuyen) which is actually cheaper anyways.
Title: Re: Ork Tough
Post by: Tsuzua on <07-21-11/0843:47>
The gas vent accessory can't be attached to pistols, but you can mod them to have integral gas-vents.

I forgot about the simsense vertigo thing. Get yourself Tracer Rounds for the assault rifle or any other full auto weapon you use, remove both smartlinks, and put a Laser Sight on both.

You can't actually attach gas vents onto heavy pistols as a mod or accessory.  Even so, the thunderbolt is a good gun.  Drop the vents and get a personalized grip and underbarrel weight instead.  If your GM uses the bonus RC from strength (which I suggest actually) optional rule, that puts you at 5 RC. 

I really wish I could point you away from the alpha since you don't use smartlink and it's one of the pricier assault rifles.  Sadly, there really isn't a better choice.  That 2 innate RC is just too huge to pass up.