[gradivus]

Is anything below not allowed?
Comments as always appreciated.

Karma Spent

750   
   Human
-20   Adept
-15   UCAS, Seattle
-45   Child of the Shadows
-50   Gang Warfare
-100   Tour of Duty UCAS Special Forces
-100   Corporate
-100   Shadowwork Weapon Specialist
-38   Buy off Paranoia, Code of Honor, Sinner
-15   Add Bioompatability, Redliner   
-123   Resources.
-15   Burnout Way
-15   MR0-2
-10   CHA 1 to 2
-15   Edg 2 to 3
-15   WIL 2 to 3
-25   Body 4 to 5
-20   Int 3 to 4
   
   
-7   Unarmed Specialization (Eztlitzli and Ars Cybernetica)
-7   Eztlitzli and Ars Cybernetica: finishing Move
   
-15   Comtacts
0   

B 5  A 2(4)   R 5(6)  S 2(4)  W 3  L 2  I 4  C 2 edg 3 ess 2.02  MR 2
Condition Monitor: P 9  S 10
Limits: P 7  M 4  S 4
Physical Initiative 9+1d6 (10+2d6)

Qualities
Biocompatabilty (-5)
Black Market Pipeline (-10) Cyberware, Charisa Lambert
Burnout Way (-15)
Redliner (-10)
Uneducated (

Adept Powers
Improved Reflexes [1]
Combat Sense [1]

Skills
Armorer         1   
Blades         5   
Computer         2   
Con                 1   
Demolitions      3   
Disguise         2   
Etiquette         1   
Firearm SG      7   
First Aid         3   
Freefall         1   
Gymnastics      1   
Heavy Weaons   1   
Intimidation      1   
Know-History      1   
Know-Prof: Atzlantechnology   3   
Know-Prof: Military   4   
Know-Street: Denver 2   
Know-Street: Safehouses 6   
Know-Street: Seattle 2   
Know-UCAS      1   
Lang: English      N   
Lang: Mandarin   1   
Leadership      1   
Navigation      1   
Negotiation      2   
Palming         2   
Perception      6   
Pilot Ground Craft   4   
Pilot Watercraft   1   
Runnning         2   
Sneaking         7   
Survival         2   
Swimming      1   
Tracking         1   
Unarmed Combat    5   (Eztlitzli and Ars Cybernetica +2)

12 Knowledge points left to spend

Martial Arts
Eztlitzli and Ars Cybernetica
   Maneuvers: Finishing Move

Augmentations
Obvious Cyberarm   Used   
   Custom STR +3   
   Custom AGI +3   
   Enhanced AGI +2   
   Armor [2]   
   Cyber Sub-machinegun   
   External Clip   
   Suppressor   
Obvious Cyberarm   Used   
   Custom STR +3   
   Enhanced STR +2   
   Custom AGI +3   
   Enhanced AGI +2   
   Armor [3]   
   Spurs   
Obvious Cyberlegs      
   Custom STR +3   
   Custom AGI +3   
   Armor [2]   
Obvious Cyberlegs      
   Custom STR +3   
   Custom AGI +3   
   Armor [2]   
Datajack      
Cybereyes [2]      
   Flash Compensation   
   Smartlink   
   Vision Magnification   
   Low-light Vision

Gear   
35085 Nuyen available to spend

Contacts
Juan Xihuitl      Fixer                   C 5 L 2
Charisa Lambert   Cybertechnician   C 6 L 1
Goober              Armorer                   C 4 L 3

[falar]

The only thing that jumps out at me is that I'm pretty sure that Burnout Way counts in your 25 points of negative qualities, so you wouldn't be able to take it. Other than that, it looks pretty legal.

Since you have cash laying around, look into getting Foot Anchors for +2 Recoil Compensation and free foot spurs.

[Stoneglobe]

What he said about qualities. Also am fairly certain you have to buy your magic up before you lose the points from essence. Looking at yours you lost 4 points of magic rating. You would need to have had a magic of 4 to lose that and then buy up the 2 points again afterwards. Otherwise there's no real penalty to putting cyber/biowear in a magic character other than a reduced maximum rating. I could be wrong (edited and often am  ) but that's always been my take on it.

[gradivus]

Burnout is 15points unlike the 20 of all the other Ways.
It was my understanding it was like martial arts in that it didn't count toward positive/neagtive limits. I could be wrong.

In priority resources happens before the normal karma expenditure so I thought you could buy resources first, suffer the consequence and then buy attributes. Life builds don't really say. So I am probably wrong on this one too.

[Strange]

Not only is Burnout's Way only 15 Karma, it is also a positive quality.  Is Eztlitzli and Ars Cybernetica one martial art?

[gradivus]

Not only is Burnout's Way only 15 Karma, it is also a positive quality.  Is Eztlitzli and Ars Cybernetica one martial art?

It's is the alternate name to Sangre y Acero, the Atzlan cybernetic martial arts.