[killer_instinct03]

Just made this character for an upcoming campaign. Had wanted him to be a young ogre maybe 17 from the Ork Underground. Does occasional work for both the Triads and the Yakuza. Please let me know if I have made any huge mistakes.

Ogre 20 BP
BOD 5
AGI 5 (7)
REA 5 (8 )
STR 5
CHA 3
INT 4
LOG 3
WIL 3
EDGE 2
MAG 4 (5)  250 BP

Skills: Automatics 6     Blades 2     Stealth group 3     Athletics group 1
Perception 3     Intimidation 4     Gunnery 2     Negotiation 1

Knowledge skills
English: N     Japanese 4     Mandarin 4     Or'zet 2     Street Gangs 4     Public Tansportation Routes 4     Zen Meditation 3

Positive Qualities: Hawkeye 5BP     Adept 5BP     Warrior's Way 10 BP     Class 1 Surge 5BP-Keen-Eared, Nasty Vibe
Negative Qualities: Berserker 10BP     Day Job 10 BP     In Debt 10 BP   Addiction Mild-Betel 5 BP     Critter Spook

Adept Powers: Improved Reflexes(geas) (3) 2PP*                                                            *Chosen with Warrior's Way
Combat Sense (geas) (4) 1PP*
Sustenance .25 PP
Nimble Fingers .25 PP
Quickdraw  .5 PP

Equipment: Novatech Airwire /w Iris Orb, optimized command, skinlink
AR Gloves, Trodes, Sim module
Analyze, Browse, and Command (6) optimized(3) each
Tag Eraser, White Noise Generator (6), Fake SIN (4)
Contact lenses-Image link, Smartlink, Flare Compensation
Glasses-Vision enhancement (3), Vision Magnification, Thermographic Vision
Earbuds-Audio Enhancement (3), Spatial Recognizer
Micro sensors- Radio Signal Scanner (4), Laser Range Finder, 2 Motion Sensors
Autopicker (6), Maglock Sequencer (4), Respirator (6), Survival Kit
Emotoy (6), Voice Mask, 10Scent Masking Cigarettes, 10 doses Narcoject
Second Hand Muscle Toner (2), Second Hand Trauma Damper
Vacuum Sealer(6), MDS Sheating Gun Case, 4 doses C-Squared, 4 doses Artificial Skin
Mapsoft (6), Fake license (4), 13 doses No Paint, 4 doses Dopadrine
Gecko Tape Gloves, Low lifestyle 1 month

Weapons: HVBR-gasvent 3 mod,small firing selection mod, Personalized Grip mod, Foregrip mod, extended clip mod, smartgun, sling
Ares Crusader-Gas vent 2,smartgun external, sound supressor mod, Auto adjusting weight mod, Custom look (2) mod, gecko grip
ceramic knife with personalized grip
Tomahawk with personalized grip
GM Nissan Doberman with AK 98 airburst link, laser sight

Armor: Form fitting body armor-Full body suit Softweave 6/2
Armor Jacket softweave 8/6
Urban Explorer Jumpsuit 6/6
Armor Clothing 4/0

Contacts: Ork Street Dealer 3/4     Firefighter 2/2    Talismonger 2/2


I left out some of the boring stuff, please let me know what needs to be fixed if anything. Thanks for your help.

[UmaroVI]

I don't see any major problems, just a few minor points that stand out:

I'd try to get 5 Intuition, and would lose a point of Logic for it. It makes sense (Intuition is street smarts, Logic is book-learning, and Ogres have a Logic penalty) and Intuition is more important.

Why do you have Gunnery 2? I think you'd do better to have another Perception and something else.

Hawkeye is useless. It looks good, until...

This quality is not cumulative with other
forms of vision magnification and is incompatible with cyber- or
bioware augmentation or replacement.

It's easy to get vision enhancements, and in fact you already have them, so hawkeye isn't helping you at all.

Your armor doesn't quite add up. You want 10/10 total for encumbrance. With FFBA, which counts as 3/1, you want another 7/9. A Jumpsuit is 6/6, leaving 1/3, which you can cover with a bit of PPP. You don't want to be wearing the armor jacket. If you want a fancy suit for stuff, you should probably go with Vashon Island (7/7) plus FFBA plus a bit of PPP to round it out to 10/10.

[killer_instinct03]

My bad both types of armor were softweave from the war book.
As for gunnery, I have it for using the doberman he own. He still have lots of work before he can be very good at rigging.
Thanks for the heads up about hawkeye.

[Charasanya]

You would probably be better off, letting the Doberman run on Autosoft. Put in a good pilot and firewall, as well as targeting, defense and perhaps covert ops and adaptability. In my opinion, you are primarily focused on handling guns yourself and would severely decrease efficiency if you jump into a drone or remote control it.

You might also consider changing Facial Sculpt to Quick Draw, as Ogres are kinda recognizable anyway. A simple face mask and/or a face case from Spy Games will do the trick too, and Quick Draw is just way too handy to pass up.