Here's an Oni version, though I think I may use what we learned and go back to the elf (sorry in advance for the multiple post). Oni seemed doable because the Fangs were natural, physical limit is easier to raise, Onis are similarly agile to elves, and the skin pigmentation could just be a spider coloration to go with theme. I don't like that the character starts with Edge 1 and I gave up platelet factories, the character is more Agile, higher defense/initiative (13 defense dice, 23 with Agile Defender/ Initiative is 12+4D6), is more likely to get that damage value on a bite attack (more unarmed dice + higher strength), can still shoot a competent spidersilk dose, venom tracking is not going to be a big problem (Masque), and can pull out a Steyr when being spiderlike just isn't cutting it. Went with Shark as a mentor spirit for the unarmed bonus, and perhaps the killing hands could come in handy for biting an enemy resistant to more normal weapons? Also took Improved Reflexes III, as it seemed like a better way to get to physical limit 6 than just the increase limit power.
Lots of Karma Needs post character generation. I'd like Edge at least to 2, a bunch of of 1 skills in the usual basics, and a climbing specialization. Some B&E gear would be nice too. Karma at start: 0 (30 Surge III, 1 nuyen, 2 to buy off surge difference, 13 positive qualities, 4 on metatype, -25 negative qualities).
== Info ==
Street Name: Spiderbite - Oni
Name: Unnamed Character
Movement: 20/40
Karma: 0
Street Cred: 0
Notoriety: 0
Public Awareness: 0
Ork (Oni)
Composure: 6
Judge Intentions: 8
Lift/Carry: 6 (45 kg/30 kg)
Memory: 4
Nuyen: 600
== Priorities ==
Metatype: B(3) - Any metatype (Oni)
Attributes: C(2) - 16 Attributes
Special: D(1) - Adept
Skills: C(2) - 28 Skills/2 Skill Groups
Resources: C(2) - 140,000¥
== Attributes ==
BOD: 3
AGI: 8 (10)
REA: 4 (7)
STR: 3
CHA: 3
INT: 5
LOG: 1
WIL: 3
EDG: 1
MAG: 5
== Derived Attributes ==
Essence: 5.02
Initiative: 9 (12) + 4d6
Rigger Initiative: 12 + 4d6
Astral Initiative: 10 + 2d6
Matrix AR Initiative: 12 + 4d6
Matrix Cold Initiative: 5 + DP + 3d6
Matrix Hot Initiative: 5 + DP + 4d6
Physical Damage Track: 10
Stun Damage Track: 10
== Limits ==
Physical: 6
Mental: 4
Social: 6
Astral: 6
== Active Skills ==
Automatics : 4 [Machine Pistols] Pool: 14 (16)
Exotic Ranged Weapon : 4 [Spidersilk] Pool: 14
Gymnastics : 2 Pool: 12
Perception : 6 Pool: 11
Running : 2 Pool: 5
Sneaking : 6 Pool: 16
Swimming : 2 Pool: 5
Unarmed Combat : 6 [Fangs] Pool: 18 (20)
== Knowledge Skills ==
English
Security Design: 3
Underworld: 5
Gangs: 3 (Dissemblers)
== Qualities ==
Adept
Agile Defender
Changeling (Class III SURGE)
Consummate Professional
Fangs
Impaired Attribute (LOG)
Impaired Attribute (STR)
Impaired Attribute (CHA)
Impassive
Jack of All Trades Master of None
Low-Light Vision
Mentor Spirit (Shark)
Metagenetic Improvement (AGI)
Mood Hair
Natural Venom (Injected, Deadly)
Prejudiced (Common, Biased) (Elves)
Quick Healer
Striking Skin Pigmentation (Arachnid Pattern)
Weak Immune System
Contacts:
Street Doc (2/3)
Antiquities Dealer (2/2)
== Powers ==
Attribute Boost (AGI) Rating: 2
Combat Sense Rating: 1
Improved Reflexes 3
Killing Hands
Motion Sense
== Lifestyles ==
Squatter 1 months
== Cyberware/Bioware ==
Masque
Muscle Toner Rating 2 (Used)
Spidersilk Gland (Used)
== Armor ==
Armor Jacket 12
Bike Racing Helmet 2
+Respirator Rating 6
Chameleon Suit 11
+Gel Packs
+Thermal Damping 3
== Weapons ==
Fangs
Pool: 18 (20) Accuracy: 6 DV: 4P AP: - RC: 2
Steyr TMP
+Concealable Holster
+Laser Sight
+Spare Clip
Pool: 14 (16) Accuracy: 5 DV: 7P AP: - RC: 2
Survival Knife
Pool: 9 Accuracy: 5 DV: 5P AP: -1 RC: 2
Unarmed Attack
Pool: 18 Accuracy: 6 DV: 3P AP: - RC: 2
== Commlink ==
MCT-3500 (ATT: 0, SLZ: 0, DP: 3, FWL: 3)
+Fake SIN Rating 4 [Fake License 4 (Concealed Carry Permit), Fake License 4 (Automatic Weapons License), Fake License 4 (Driver's License)]
+Micro-Transceiver
+Sim Module
+Earbuds Rating 1
+Subvocal Mic
== Gear ==
Ammo: Regular Ammo (Machine Pistols) x60
Climbing Gear
Contacts Rating 1
+Image Link
+Polychromic Lens (to look menacing/spider-ish when needed)
Gecko Tape Gloves
Rapelling Gloves
Survival Kit
== Vehicles ==
Yamaha Growler (Off-Road Bike)
+Sensor Array Rating 2