is this any better ? 
Don't be discouraged, the advice I put out is for heightened levels of optimization. If that isn't what you necessarily need/want, then just do what's right for you.
That being said, you asked to be a Infiltrator/B&E guy who can take people out quietly. So, when you ask if this build is better I have to assume you're asking mechanically regarding those roles: taking people out, stealth and B&E. Stealth and B&E is not really a skill-set that requires or deserves singular dedication - you can be a primary combatant level shooter/melee too - i.e. take people out quietly.
In that light, no, you really aren't any better off here. While elf is perfect for the shooter/infiltrator/B&E/with a smide-of-Face, was there a specific reason you went from Ork to Elf? It very much makes my previous advice which was made in the context of an Ork build (which you seemed to have ignored anyway) meaningless.
Major questions/issues to address now: you dropped your STR down to nothing, but picked up a STR based weapon (Blades)? Counterproductive. You also dropped any form of Firearm and your REA and INT, this all combined - even though you managed an 11 Pool in Blades - has pretty much made you into a complete non-combatant. You now really cannot contribute in any meaningful way to combat. For most tables, this is bad. You can defend yourself, but that's really it.
A general rule, don't hard-max any stat, unless you're a Technomancer or a super-BOD Troll build. The reason, for instance with this elf build, you're paying 50 Karma at chargen what would cost you 35 post-chargen - this is a horrible inefficiency.
Your Animal Handling Incompetency is kind of cheese, your GM may or may not allow it. And don't get me wrong, I've used that exact Incompetency but it was paired with Animal Training, a Mild Allergy to animals with hair, and Spirit Bane (Beast) as well... so I guess what I'm saying is, use your Neg Quals to build character, not to try and grab free BP.
Your Powers and Ware look like they'll line up nicely once we get the rest of this sorted out...
