Seems clear to me...?
You're assuming things not actually stated by the text though.
First, that when you cast the spell on yourself there is no threshold or opposed dice pool - that is implied by the text not actually mentioning one, but that isn't clearly the thing to do because there are other implications involved (see next point).
Second, that where the text does clearly say "For detection spells, the Sorcery + Magic test is opposed by Body + Willpower..." it isn't meaning the one made to determine if the spell actually happens or not like is normal for spells.
Third, the range of the detection granted by a spell like detect enemies is determined by net hits on the spellcasting test so your interpretation that the target rolls Body + Willpower once they enter the area is definitely wrong because (see next point).
Fourth, that there is any roll at all once the spell is in effect - that's not actually stated. What is stated is that if a detect enemies spell is successfully cast on you, you know if anyone within the sense's range (Magic + Net hits on the spellcasting test in meters) has hostile intentions toward you. Not who, not how many, just a yes/no answer to "is someone nearby hostile towards specifically me."