Thanks! I've made revisions based on the advice here and what I found in the archetypes. Does this seem more viable?
Name: Natsumi Kinomoto (Street Alias: Ephemera. Online Handle: Otohime)
Concept: Shy but talented technomancer
Stream: E-scapist
Metatype: Human
Birthplace/Home city: Neo-Tokyo, JIS.
Birthdate: October 15, 2054.
Positive Qualities: Technomancer, Aptitude (Hacking), Codeslinger (Command), Analytical Mind, Paragon (Black Hat)
Negative Qualities: AIPS (rating 3), Flashbacks 2, Records on File (Mitsuhama)
Body 3
Agility 2
Reaction 2
Strength 1
Charisma 4
Intution 4
Logic 3
Willpower 5
Edge 2
Intiative 6
Resonance 6
Essence 6
Skills
Hacking 6
Software 4
Compiling 4
Registering 4
Software 4
Infilitration 4
Gunnery 4
Perception 3
Computer 1
Data Search 1
Electronic Warfare 1
Knowledge Skills
Japanese (native language)
English 1
Japanese Politics 2
Matrix Games 2
Data Havens 3
Yakuza 2
Japanese Corps 3
Pirate Trid Broadcasts 1
Matrix Security 2
Area Knowledge (Neo-Tokyo) 2
Safe Houses 2
Contacts
"Isis" (L: 4 C: 4): Admin of a data haven popular among the hacking community.
Complex Forms
Exploit (6) with Mute, Analyze (6), Command (6), Stealth (6), Decrypt (2)
Equipment
Lifestyle (middle)
Doc Wagon Contract (Basic)
Fake ID (rating 4)-Asami Hitsugaya (University of Neo-Tokyo undergraduate in Computer Science)
Fake License (Firearms-rating 4)
Ares Viper Silvergun (with hidden gun arm slide and 40 flechette rounds)
Form-fitting Body Armor (with Nonconductivity rating 4)
Clothing (regular) x10
Clothing (chic) x2
Leather Jacket
SecureTech PPP System Vitals Protector, Shin Guards, Forearm Guards
Shiawase Kanmushi microdrone x3
Earbuds 1 (with skinlink and audio enhancement 3)
Glasses 1 (with skinlink and vision enhancement 3 and image link)
Meta Link Commlink x2 (both with Vector Xim OS) with Satelite Link
Tag Eraser
Voice Mask
Fake Documents
Fake License (Rigging) 3
Virtual Weather
VR Game x9
Wall Space
Virtual Surround Music
Satelite Link
Datachip x41
GM Nissan Doberman (Chameleon Coating, Rigger Cocoon, Ares-S III Supersquirt, KE IV+DMSO rounds (x200), Pepper Punch Round (x17), Camera 2 (Vision Enhancement 3, Low-light Vision), Camera 2 (Thermiographic vision, Vision Magnification), Microphone 2 (Spatial Recognizer, Audio Enhancement 3), Laser Rangefinder, Motion Sensor, Thermometric Sensor
Lone Star Strato-9 (Armor 9, Chameleon Coating, Camera 6 (vision enhancement 3, low-light vision, smartlink), Camera 6 (thermiographic vision, vision magnification), Microphone 6 (audio enhancement 3, spatial recognizer), Laser Rangefinder, Motion Sensor, Lone Star FlashFlood Water Cannon.)
Flying Eye (Chameleon Coating, Camera 6, Vision Enhancement 3, Vision Magnification)