I am pretty new to the 4e ruleset, and i am hoping to get some opinions/insight on this build before i take it out for a spin...
Already have the hacker/magician/face etc.... Need a primary combat character so any advice is greatly appreciated.
Main thing for me is not having used the system, just reading it over and over...so something might be good on paper, but suck wind in action.
Thanks in advance

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== Info ==
Street Name: Grimm Lee
Name: Atarasi Katao
Movement: 8/20, Swim: 6
Karma: 0
Street Cred: 0
Notoriety: 1
Public Awareness: 0
Dwarf Male Age Late Twenties
Height 4.3. Weight 245
Composure: 7
Judge Intentions: 4
Lift/Carry: 15 (135 kg/90 kg)
Memory: 7
Nuyen: 30
== Attributes ==
BOD: 6
AGI: 5 (7)
REA: 2 (4)
STR: 7 (9)
CHA: 2
INT: 2
LOG: 2
WIL: 5
EDG: 3
== Derived Attributes ==
Essence: 0.39
Initiative: 4 (6)
IP: 1 (3)
Matrix Initiative: 6
Matrix IP: 1
Physical Damage Track: 11
Stun Damage Track: 11
== Active Skills ==
Animal Handling : 0 Pool: 1
Animal Training : 0 Pool: 1
Archery : 0 Pool: 6
Armorer : 0 Pool: 1
Artisan : 0 Pool: 1
Automatics : 4 Pool: 11
Blades : 4 Pool: 11
Climbing : 1 Pool: 10
Clubs : 4 Pool: 11
Computer : 0 Pool: 1
Con : 0 Pool: 1
Cybercombat : 0 Pool: 1
Data Search : 0 Pool: 1
Demolitions : 0 Pool: 1
Disguise : 1 Pool: 3
Diving : 0 Pool: 5
Dodge : 1 Pool: 5
Escape Artist : 1 Pool: 8
Etiquette : 0 Pool: 1
First Aid : 0 Pool: 1
Flight : 1 Pool: 10
Forgery : 1 Pool: 8
Gunnery : 0 Pool: 6
Gymnastics : 1 Pool: 8
Hacking : 0 Pool: 1
Heavy Weapons : 1 Pool: 8
Infiltration : 1 Pool: 8
Instruction : 0 Pool: 1
Intimidation : 0 Pool: 1
Leadership : 0 Pool: 1
Locksmith : 0 Pool: 6
Longarms : 4 Pool: 11
Navigation : 0 Pool: 1
Negotiation : 0 Pool: 1
Palming : 1 Pool: 8
Parachuting : 0 Pool: 5
Perception : 1 Pool: 3
Pilot Ground Craft : 2 Pool: 6
Pilot Watercraft : 0 Pool: 3
Pistols : 4 Pool: 11
Riding : 0 Pool: 3
Running : 1 Pool: 10
Shadowing : 1 Pool: 3
Survival : 0 Pool: 4
Swimming : 1 Pool: 12
Throwing Weapons : 1 Pool: 8
Tracking : 0 Pool: 1
Unarmed Combat : 4 Pool: 11
== Knowledge Skills ==
: 0 Pool: 0
Area Knowledge: Seattle : 2 Pool: 4
English : N Pool: 0 (2)
Fuedal Japanese History : 2 Pool: 4
Japanese : 1 Pool: 3
Russian : 1 Pool: 3
Underworld : 1 [Drugs] Pool: 3 (5)
Yakuza : 2 [Organizations] Pool: 4 (6)
== Contacts ==
Cyberdoc (2, 2)
Forger(IDs/Licenses) (2, 2)
== Qualities ==
Biocompatability (Cyberware)
Poor Self Control (Vindictive)
Prejudiced (Common, Outspoken) (Law Enforcement Officials)
SINner (Criminal) (UCAS - Currently Incarcerated)
Thermographic Vision
== Lifestyles ==
Street 1 months
== Cyberware/Bioware ==
Bone Lacing (Ceramic)
Cyberfins
Data Lock
Datajack
Dermal Plating Rating 2
Internal Air Tank
Muscle Replacement Rating 2
Skin Pocket
Skinlink
Wired Reflexes Rating 2
== Armor ==
Actioneer Business Clothes5/3
+Fire Resistance 6
+Nonconductivity 6
Form-Fitting Full-Body Suit6/2
+Chemical Protection 6
SecureTech PPP Armor (Ensemble with Helmet)2/6
== Weapons ==
Ares Alpha
+Bayonet Mount
+Extended Clip, 50 Drum
+Gas Vent 3
+Metahuman Customization
+Personalized Grip
+Smartgun System
Pool: 13 DV: 6P AP: -1 RC: 6
Ares Predator IV
+Hidden Gun Arm Slide
+Chameleon Coating
+Extended Clip
+Silencer
+Skinlink
+Smartgun System
Pool: 13 DV: 5P AP: -1 RC: 0
AZ-150 Stun Baton
+Personalized Grip
Pool: 11 DV: 7S(e) AP: -half RC: 1
Bayonet
Pool: 11 DV: 7P AP: - RC: 0
Ceramic Bone Lacing
Pool: 11 DV: 7P AP: - RC: 0
Ceramic Knife
Pool: 11 DV: 7P AP: - RC: 0
Ceramic Knife
Pool: 11 DV: 7P AP: - RC: 0
Franchi SPAS-22
+Shock Pad
+Stock
+Metahuman Customization
+Smartgun System
Pool: 13 DV: 7P AP: -1 RC: 0
Grenade: Flash-Bang
Pool: 8 DV: 6S (10m Radius) AP: -3 RC: 0
Grenade: Gas
Pool: 8 DV: Chemical (10m Radius) AP: - RC: 0
Grenade: High Explosive
Pool: 8 DV: 10P (-2/m) AP: -2 RC: 0
Grenade: Incendiary
Pool: 8 DV: Special AP: - RC: 0
Grenade: Smoke
Pool: 8 DV: (10m Radius) AP: - RC: 0
Grenade: Smoke
Pool: 8 DV: (10m Radius) AP: - RC: 0
Katana
+Metahuman Customization
+Personalized Grip
Pool: 11 DV: 9P AP: -1 RC: 1
Katana
+Metahuman Customization
+Personalized Grip
Pool: 11 DV: 9P AP: -1 RC: 1
Minigrenade: Flash-Bang
Pool: 11 DV: 6S (10m Radius) AP: -3 RC: 0
Minigrenade: High Explosive
Pool: 11 DV: 10P (-2/m) AP: -2 RC: 0
Minigrenade: Incendiary
Pool: 11 DV: Special AP: - RC: 0
Monofilament Sword
+Chameleon Coating
+Metahuman Customization
+Personalized Grip, Melee
Pool: 12 DV: 9P AP: -1 RC: 0
Morrissey Élan
+Chameleon Coating
Pool: 11 DV: 4P AP: - RC: 0
Sap
Pool: 11 DV: 6S AP: - RC: 0
Sap
Pool: 11 DV: 6S AP: - RC: 0
Shock Glove
Pool: 11 DV: 5S(e) AP: -half RC: 0
Shock Glove
Pool: 11 DV: 5S(e) AP: -half RC: 0
Unarmed Attack
Pool: 11 DV: 5S AP: - RC: 0
Walther MA-2100
+Shock Pad
+Stock
+Barrel Extension
+Metahuman Customization
+Personalized Grip
+Smartgun System
Pool: 13 DV: 7P AP: -3 RC: 1
Yamaha Pulsar
+Hidden Gun Arm Slide
+Personalized Grip
Pool: 11 DV: 6S(e) AP: -half RC: 1
== Martial Arts ==
Kali
++1 DV on Blades attacks
Off-Hand Training
Two Weapon Style
== Commlink ==
Meta Link (1, 3, 2, 2)
+Renraku Ichi [System 3]
+FTL Matrixware Net Wizard [Analyze 3, Browse 3, Command 1, Edit 2, Purge 3]
Novatech Airware (3, 4, 3, 3)
+Novatech Navi
+Customized Interface
+FTL Matrixware Power Suite [Analyze 3, Browse 4, Command 2, Edit 4, Purge 4, Scan 2]
+Spoof Chip
== Gear ==
Ammo: EX-Explosive Rounds (Heavy Pistols) x200
Ammo: EX-Explosive Rounds (Assault Rifles) x250
Ammo: EX-Explosive Rounds (Shotguns) x120
Ammo: EX-Explosive Rounds (Sniper Rifles) x150
Ammo: Hi-C Plastic Rounds (Holdouts) x30
Ammo: Silver Bullets (Sniper Rifles) x30
Ammo: Stick-n-Shock (Heavy Pistols) x145
Ammo: Stick-n-Shock (Assault Rifles) x200
Ammo: Stick-n-Shock (Shotguns) x100
Ammo: Taser Dart (Tasers) x100
Contact Lenses Rating 3
+Image Link
+Smartlink
+Flare Compensation
+Skinlink
Contact Lenses Rating 3
+Image Link
+Smartlink
+Flare Compensation
+Skinlink
Glasses Rating 2
+Vision Enhancement Rating 3
+Ultrasound
+Skinlink
Glasses Rating 3
+Thermographic
+Low Light
+Vision Magnification
+Skinlink
Grenade: Flash-Bang x6
Grenade: Gas x6
Grenade: High Explosive x3
Grenade: Incendiary x2
Grenade: Smoke x6
Grenade: Smoke x12
Minigrenade: Flash-Bang x12
Minigrenade: High Explosive x12
Minigrenade: Incendiary x12
Tag Eraser
Voice Mask
== Vehicles ==
Suzuki Mirage (Racing Bike)
+Chameleon Coating
+Firewall 5
+Manual Control Override, Drive-by-Wire
+Metahuman Adjustment
+Spoof Chip
+Vehicle Sensor
== Karma Expenses ==
== Nuyen Expenses ==
10/31/2012 10:07:42 AM 30 Starting Nuyen
== Description ==
Grimm Lee is a nothing special at first glance, japanese dwarf. With no brutally obvious Cyber-Limbs, he is often under-estimated when he wades into close combat with his yakuza-trained martial arts skills, and is a crack shot with any type of gun, and will toss a grenade if needs be. He is a point-man, with the flexibility to take on support and sniper roles. He plays the role of a bodygaurd/data courier type, but he is also a street samurai in a bullet proof suit, with a full form fitting suit and PPP pieces underneath. He is the silent type, and only mildly buys into the yakuza philosophy, since he was never fully accpeted due to his low birth he had to work hard to survive until his potential became apparent, also he was raised to hate the cops, go figure. He is not here to talk, unless he is interogating the only survivor or he is delivering data to a client or talking to a team mate. He is not a joyless man, but he is focused on whatever duties he is set with. He learned to keep his mouth shut if he wanted to keep all his fingers, but now, he is in prison, with his former bosses dead or imprisoned as well. He trained with the Kali-style, focusing on fighting with 2 knives and his strange "iajutsu" technique
== Background ==
Atarasi Katao was born to SINless immigrants in Seattle. He grew up poor and fighting for everything. His parents tried, and di what they could, but with hardly any money, and being SINless in Seattle, Atarasi fell into a Yakuza cell known as the Yellow Lotus. They specialized in drugs and simsense. He worked as a mule and data courier, working his way up to a small time enforcer, and eventually, a bodygaurd for the boss. He also has fought in illegal fighting pits for his masters. After a few years, the cell was involved in a blood fued with another, larger more influential cell, and was set up by law enforcement. Atarasi is currently in prison on drugs and weapons charges.
== Concept ==
Former Yakuza Slave turned top enforcer/body gaurd/data gaurd....