Sichr you're clear to post up and use your char just send me the critter over PM so I can look it over, HydroRaven, you have 2 sustaining health foci, their bonus doesn't stack. If you can in any way finagle your skills to get the Karma for a power foci that'd help you in all spell casting but counterspelling. Another thing is, I'd recommend you and Bewilder beast to pick like automatics and longarms or pistols and longarms, and take them at skill level 1 or2, but specialize in shotguns, SMGs or machine pistols, and Semi automatics or revolvers.
Like for Bewilderbeast, you could take longarms at 3, but specialize in shotguns, and take pistols at 1 but specialize in semi autos, because those are what you guys trained in.
Oh, before I forget, if you were to make a roll for something you would put in your character name, say you're only doing 1 roll (Which in most cases you'll only be doing one at a time, unless you're splitting your dice pool to attack twice.) and then put in something like 10d6.hits(5), so that would then roll ten dice and tell you how many of them rolled a 5 or higher.