Hey, well-done version of the escaped super-warrior clone thing, Makki. Went full bore with the Neg Quals, I like.
My critiques are mostly academic. Only a few mechanics things: first, I have you coming in over the 375 Karma limit to Attributes with a 750 build... perhaps you haven't accounted for the EDG counting towards this limit (worst case scenario you have 3 EDG vs 4)? Next is that you should drop your WIL by 1 and boost your BOD by 1. You'll have the same number of Stun soak boxes, and an additional Phys soak, plus be able to bear heftier armor (so basically that 4 WIL does nothing for you over a 3, other than adding 1 die to your Composure pool - not worth it). Also, after plugging it all in to Chummer, you might have 2 unspent chargen-Karma? Though I probably just missed something...
The academic things are: First, how is she "Born Rich" when she's basically a fancy lab-rat? Next, I would recommend against taking the Firearms and Close Combat skill groups. They're not good Groups. They both only have 3 skills, and all of the skills in them are pretty much completely redundant in functionality. I understand that "super-warrior" is part of the concept, and that's why I'm presenting this as academic, but you'd be able to do (even) more with this character if you cut it back to 1 firearm and 1 melee, and lose next to no practical functionality. You could increase Perception and/or Stealth or Electronics or Athletics or add First Aid or Heavy weapons or Gunnery (either of which would make you significantly more diverse than having all 3 firearms) or whatever other skill-set you might like her to have. Also, I'm not a big fan of investing in Restricted Gear for level 4 Toner at chargen. This is mostly just the ESS-conservationist in me, and I understand it's part of the genetic engineering here (plus it's probably cheaper than boosting them with Karma post-chargen), and that's why I'm presenting this as an academic argument. But, maybe just play around with what else you could do with the 10 Karma from Restricted gear, 0.4 ESS and 16K Y? Mostly looking at a Martial Art and Reflex Recorders in my mind. But don't get me wrong, the Toner 4 is not a horrible use (you get quite a bit more out of bumping the Attribute than Reflex Recorders of course), but you've just spent extra up front to take away from your room to grow is all.
All in all, I really like it, good burnenating build.
