This game is going live soon, and I'm out of ideas on improvements, but always open to suggestions.
If you read Russian, I know I have a couple of things backwards near the end that I still plan on fixing (as far as background goes) but looking for improvements character wise.
I know I wasted a little bit of money on Muscle Aug, but I didn't want her walking around with a strength of 1.
== Info ==
Street Name: Sable
Name: Zhanna Nizamutdinova
Movement: 10/25, Swim: 6
Karma: 0
Street Cred: 0
Notoriety: 0
Public Awareness: 0
Elf (Dryad) F Age 27
Height 5'11 Weight 145
Composure: 9
Judge Intentions: 11
Lift/Carry: 7 (45 kg/30 kg)
Memory: 4
Nuyen: 0
== Attributes ==
BOD: 4
AGI: 6 (10)
REA: 5 (7)
STR: 1 (3)
CHA: 7
INT: 4
LOG: 2
WIL: 2
EDG: 2
== Derived Attributes ==
Essence: 0.96
Initiative: 9 (11)
IP: 1 (3)
Matrix Initiative: 7
Matrix IP: 1
Physical Damage Track: 10
Stun Damage Track: 9
== Active Skills ==
Animal Handling : 0 Pool: 3
Animal Training : 0 Pool: 3
Archery : 0 Pool: 9
Armorer : 1 Pool: 3
Artisan : 0 Pool: 3
Automatics : 0 Pool: 9
Blades : 0 Pool: 9
Climbing : 1 Pool: 7
Clubs : 1 Pool: 11
Computer : 0 Pool: 1
Con : 4 Pool: 15
Cybercombat : 0 Pool: 1
Data Search : 1 Pool: 3
Demolitions : 0 Pool: 1
Disguise : 0 Pool: 3
Diving : 0 Pool: 3
Dodge : 0 Pool: 6
Escape Artist : 0 Pool: 9
Etiquette : 2 Pool: 12
Exotic Ranged Weapon : 1 [Spit] Pool: 11
First Aid : 0 Pool: 1
Flight : 0 Pool: 2
Forgery : 1 Pool: 11
Gunnery : 0 Pool: 9
Gymnastics : 1 Pool: 14
Hacking : 0 Pool: 1
Heavy Weapons : 1 Pool: 11
Infiltration : 1 Pool: 11
Instruction : 0 Pool: 6
Intimidation : 0 Pool: 6
Leadership : 0 Pool: 6
Locksmith : 0 Pool: 9
Longarms : 0 Pool: 9
Navigation : 0 Pool: 3
Negotiation : 2 Pool: 12
Palming : 4 Pool: 14
Parachuting : 0 Pool: 3
Perception : 1 Pool: 5
Pilot Ground Craft : 0 Pool: 6
Pilot Watercraft : 0 Pool: 6
Pistols : 6 [Semi-Automatics] Pool: 16 (18)
Riding : 0 Pool: 6
Running : 0 Pool: 2
Shadowing : 1 Pool: 5
Survival : 0 Pool: 1
Swimming : 0 Pool: 2
Throwing Weapons : 0 Pool: 9
Tracking : 0 Pool: 3
Unarmed Combat : 0 Pool: 9
== Knowledge Skills ==
Bars and Clubs : 3 Pool: 7
English : N Pool: 0
Firearms : 1 Pool: 3
Russian : 5 Pool: 9
Security Tactics : 2 Pool: 4
Underworld : 1 [Smuggling] Pool: 5 (7)
Vory : 5 Pool: 9
== Contacts ==
Daemon Jackson (Armorer) (2, 3)
Lanoi Vong (Smuggler) (1, 2)
Nikki Koslov (Fixer) (4, 3)
Sarah Lavaki (Reporter) (4, 4)
== Qualities ==
Allergy (Uncommon, Mild) (Silver)
Ambidextrous
Distinctive Style (Racial)
Glamour (Racial)
Low-Light Vision (Racial)
Mania/Phobia (Common, Mild) (Claustaphobia)
Natural Venom (Ekyelebenle Venom)
Prejudiced (Common, Biased) (Dwarves)
Restricted Gear (Rating 1)
SINner (Standard) (Zhanna Nizamutdinov ( Жанна Низамутдинов))
Symbiosis (Racial)
Trustworthy (1 Skill) (Con)
Unusual Hair (Violet)
== Lifestyles ==
Graicen Estates 2 months
Comforts: Middle
Entertainment: Middle
Necessities: Middle
Neighborhood: High
Security: Middle
Qualities: Rural Home [2LP]
AI in Residence [-3LP]
Sprite Magnet (Rating 1) [-1LP]
== Cyberware/Bioware ==
Cyber Safety
Cybereyes Basic System Rating 3
+Eye Recording Unit
+Image Link
+Flare Compensation
+Smartlink
+Vision Enhancement Rating 3
+Vision Magnification
+Low-Light Vision
+Eye Light System
Gecko Hands
Muscle Augmentation Rating 2
Muscle Toner Rating 4
Synthacardium Rating 3
Wired Reflexes Rating 2
== Armor ==
Bike Racing Armor 4/7
+YNT SoftWeave
Bike Racing Helmet 1/2
+Flare Compensation
+Image Link
Chameleon Suit 6/4
+Thermal Damping 2
Form-Fitting Full-Body Suit6/2
Lined Coat 6/4
Très Chic Clothing casualwear (Aztechnology)0/0
Zoë businesswear (Zoë) 0/0
== Weapons ==
Commlink: Stun Gas Deployment
Pool: 16 DV: Chemical AP: - RC: 0
Commlink: Stun Gas Deployment
Pool: 16 DV: Chemical AP: - RC: 0
Commlink: Stun Gas Deployment
Pool: 16 DV: Chemical AP: - RC: 0
Grenade: Flare
Pool: 9 DV: 0 AP: - RC: 0
Grenade: Flash-Bang
Pool: 9 DV: 6S (10m Radius) AP: -3 RC: 0
Grenade: Smoke
Pool: 9 DV: (10m Radius) AP: - RC: 0
Savalette Guardian
+Concealable Holster
+Cyber Safety
+Spare Clips
+Spare Clips
+Spare Clips
+Spare Clips
+Spare Clips
+Weapon Personality
+Chameleon Coating
+Electronic Firing
+Gas Vent 2
+Personalized Grip
+Smartgun System
Pool: 18 (20) DV: 5P AP: -1 RC: 4
Savalette Guardian
+Concealable Holster
+Cyber Safety
+Spare Clips
+Spare Clips
+Spare Clips
+Spare Clips
+Spare Clips
+Weapon Personality
+Chameleon Coating
+Electronic Firing
+Gas Vent 2
+Personalized Grip
+Smartgun System
Pool: 18 (20) DV: 5P AP: -1 RC: 4
Telescopic Staff
Pool: 11 DV: 4P AP: - RC: 0
Unarmed Attack
Pool: 9 DV: 2S AP: - RC: 0
Walther Secura Kompakt w/ Smartlink
+Concealable Holster
+Cyber Safety
+Silencer
+Chameleon Coating
+Electronic Firing
+Personalized Grip
+Smartgun System
Pool: 18 (20) DV: 5P AP: -1 RC: 1
Venom Spit Attack (Ekyelebenle Venom)
Pool: 11 Spd: 1 Combat Turn, Pen: 0, Power: 8, Effect: Physical Damage, Blindness (Arsenal pg 84)
== Martial Arts ==
Krav Maga
+Ready Weapon as Free Action
== Commlink ==
Disposable Commlink (1, 2, 1, 3)
+Disposable Commlink OS
+Biometric Lock
+Stun Gas Deployment
Erika Elite (3, 3, 2, 4)
+Biometric Lock
+Stun Gas Deployment
+Mangadyne Deva
Novatech Airware (3, 3, 3, 3)
+Iris Orb
+Biometric Lock
+Armor Case Rating 2
+Stun Gas Deployment
== Gear ==
Ammo: EX-Explosive Rounds (Heavy Pistols) x40
Ammo: Regular Ammo (Heavy Pistols) x60
Ammo: Stick-n-Shock (Heavy Pistols) x60
AR Makeup
Autopicker Rating 2
Backpack
Blister Pack x3
Dry Lubricant x10
Fake SIN (Alina Kirchev) Rating 4
+Fake License (Firearms Permit) Rating 4
+Fake License (Carry Permit) Rating 4
+Fake License (Bioware/Cyberware Permit) Rating 4
+Fake License (Armor Permit) Rating 4
Fake SIN (Tatyana Ivanoff) Rating 4
+Fake License (Firearms Permit) Rating 4
+Fake License (Carry Permit) Rating 4
+Fake License (Bioware/Cyberware Permit) Rating 4
+Fake License (Armor Permit) Rating 4
Freeze Foam Rating 6 x5
Glasses Rating 1
+Mark 74 Smartlink
Grenade: Flare x2
Grenade: Flash-Bang x2
Grenade: Smoke x2
Light Stick x5
Micro Flare Launcher
Micro Flares x3
Wire Clippers
== Vehicles ==
Honda-GM 3220 (Sports Car)
+Obsolescent
+Racing Tires Rating 4
+Reduced Economy
+Run Flat Tires Rating 4
+Smuggling Compartment, Normal
+Vehicle Sensor
MCT Fly-Spy (Minidrone)
+Improved Takeoff and Landing Level 2
+Camera, Trideo Rating 3
+Thermographic
+Maneuver (Self) Rating 2
+Copy Protection Rating 2
+Registration
+Minidrone Sensor
Suzuki Mirage (Racing Bike)
+Anti-Theft
+Run Flat Tires Rating 2
+Vehicle Sensor
== Background ==
Zhanna Nikitovna Nizamutdinova was born in Saratov, Russia to Russian Brandy player, Nikita Nizamutdinov. Growing up, she was naturally charismatic, and once her glamor began to take effect on the people around her as her goblinization set in, she began to take advantage of her gifts to get what she wanted in life. People naturally trusted her, no matter what lies slipped between her lips. When she was 12, her father was traded to the Arkhangelsk Sables.
Once in Arkhangelsk, she began stealing as well. One day she came across an opal and obsidian hilted knife, and pocketed it. She was caught by a known Vory smuggler, but she was still able to talk her way out of trouble using her glamour. The smuggler’s boss watched it on tape and saw much potential in her. Two weeks later, the Vory boss approached her and informed Zhanna that he had information that her father had been abusing certain banned substances to increase his performance on the Sables. He offered to keep the information a secret if she could run a few errands for him. For the first four years, she ran simple errands for the Vory in Arkhangelsk, smuggling data chips from one place to another. It was during these years that she found her new love, shooting. When she wasn’t smuggling, cheering her father on during games, or going to school, she was shooting.
At the age of 16, she seemed to have peaked in many of her abilities, but she still strived for more. Her Vory boss then offered her more dangerous missions, smuggling information, money, and weapons to the shapeshifters in the Yakut area. In return, she not only got money but her first taste of the ‘ware. Most of the ware her boss bought for her was second hand, but it was cheap and it let her push her limits beyond what she ever thought was possible.
While she continued to improve, her father turned to other performance enhancing drugs to help push his now aging body to keep up with the newer, younger players. This led him to an addition that quickly put him into debt to a group of dwarven bookies. When Zhanna was 21, she discovered just how much her father was in debt when the bookies kidnapped her. She was held for four months, while her father threw games that the Sables should have been able to easily win in order to pay off the debt. She finally escaped from the bookies the night before a game that would the Sables had to win for them to make it to the championship game when she discovered her venom gland and spat Ekyelebenle Venom into her captor's eyes. With her return, Nikita played the best game that he had ever played. The Sables won, and weeks later won the national championship for Arkhangelsk, and the bookies lost millions. Just hours after the game, as they returned home they found it engulfed in flames. As the two watched their home of nine years burn to the ground, the bookies came out of the shadows and began beating the two with pipes. She heard the sickening sound as her father’s back shattered from a blow. During the struggle, she was able to steal one of the dwarf’s guns from its holster, and she shot and killed them all. As she awaited the ambulance, her father succumbed to his wounds and died.
She became withdrawn from the only family she had let, the Vory. She knew she needed a new start, and her boss allowed her to leave the syndicate on good terms. He gave her a gift as she left Arkhangelsk for the last time, two custom Savalette Guardian pistols. Both were heavily modified and custom built for her. When the chameleon coating was turned off on them, one was silver with ebon grips, and the other was ebon with silvery opal grips. The ebon one had смерть (smert (life)) inscribed down the side while the other had жизнь (zhizn (death)) inscribed.