I have a couple. I did not read all 21 pages to see if they have been caught before.
1) On page 211, Chapter "Rooftops and Rainbows" Line 15-16
A voice sliced over the comm. “Can the chatter, Badger Three.”
Should read:
A voice sliced over the comm. “Can the chatter, Badger Four.”
Since Coyote is Badger Three, as we see in the next column, and she answers to Badger 4 in the next page.
2) First paragraph on Page 299, end of section for Homunculus:
A watcher’s skills are equal to half the Force of the ritual (rounded up).
is clearly a copy/paste from the Watcher section earlier. It should read:
A Homunculus' skills are equal to half the Force of the ritual (rounded up).
3) Conjuring Chapter on page 211 talkes about Spell formulas, and tells us to find the prices on the Magical Goods table on page 326. When we go to page 326, we find prices for new Formula, but not new Rituals. For example, what is the price for buying the formula for the "Homunculus" ritual?
Yes, I like the Homunculus for its ability to make a zombie for me

and I read it very carefully

Thanks for making a great game...