Okay, boys, sorry it took me longer this time. Here we go:
@Jack:
As I understand, your build is full up. I'm missing the backstory, though. I'd be interested to check this out before we start through. And please leave some notes about how you see your role in the start of the plot: who do you know, what's your intention, and so on. You're the only non-runner, if I got that right.
@luckace:
If there is anything you'd like to alter (see my post after your character), this would be the time. I think it's a nice thing you renamed your Renraku Sensei to Renruka Sensei, as it reminds me of Renuka

hope she and the baby are well.
As I said, you might want to invest in visual enhancements which can cost you a lot of dice. I'd also choose a bit of a ... trollier weapon, but that's a matter of taste only.
Are you sure that "Cyberware" doesn't count as a technical skill towards
Uneducated?
@gilga:
I must admit that I'm not absolutely friend with pixies as shadowrunners, since they are uncommonly rare, are outstanding and extraordinary even in the Sixth World. Even more so, they are a rather strange character to play in Kathmandu, since there are no Pixie populations anywhere outside Europe. I don't have a problem with you playing it, if you like, but please consider that this is the most awkward character imaginable, and might possibly spoil the theme the same way 3CPO would have spoilt The Lord of the Rings.
But feel free to play it anyway if you like it. It's 2075, and planes fly everywhere. Just be aware that the majority of people in Kathmandu will never even have heard that things like you exist.
Some comments on your stats:
- Is MAG: 11 a typo?
- How do you manage INT: 7, LOG: 6 and WIL: 5 with only 12 attributes? I can't look up Pixie stats just right now but on the assumption that you don't get racial modifiers worht 10 points, there must be a mistake somewhere here.
- Your skills sum up to a total of 87 points. Skills A gives you a maximum of 76 points. Where does the rest come from?
- Could you please post how you spent your Karma?
- Erika is not a commlink, but a deck. Anyway, more importantly: You are aware that you don't have a DNI, I assume. This means, you can only ever deck in AR mode.
- How exactly do you pay for Erika (49,500) and 42 programs (most of them each 250 nuyen) with 6,000 nuyen?
If you want to play the character, please solve these issues. I might have missed some new rules, but I'm almost absolutely sure this is a (very) illegal build. I'm not entirely happy if I have to check every single stat of your character.