As a Bay Area resident, I was looking forward to this. It's a pretty interesting update, with some good run potential. There are a few things that were omitted that may be fodder for enterprising GMs:
- Alameda Naval Air Station: who occupies it now?
- Treasure Island, between SF and Oakland
- Angel Island: possible Awakening hooks, given its history as a quarantine area for Chinese immigrants in the 19th century
- People's University: whatever happened to it?
- Moffett Field: between the 237 and 101; currently some Air Guard, NASA and private stuff
- Crystal Springs reservoir: important water source for SF, just west of the 280, bisected by the 92
- Caltrain from SF to Gilroy: note that this is the only rail line that goes into SF, so it pulls double duty for both commuter Caltrain and cargo
- ethnic connections to the old countries: the ethnic diversity of the Bay Area lends itself to possible plot hooks; for example, there's a large Afghan population in Fremont.
Also, huge copy editing pet peeve: "discrete" and "discreet" are not the same word. I've seen this in multiple publications, and it's driving me nuts!