It is a good guide, I would add what equipment, skills, qualities, you feel is the best to start out with (Perception, I would say skill everyone should have and I always recommend taking visual +2) , and what you think is a big no no, especially if this guide is intended for your players. Like what you would reccommend they take in your games. One of the hardest things for New players I think, is trying to figure out what you you should buy, knowledge skills to take, etc. Maybe have pack for every Priority, like Decker, if you take Prioity C, you recOmmend this deck, these prOgrams, this ware,etc.. I personally don't like the packs in RF book.
Oh I think you should add the following:
No one should ever play a Centaur, they are Abominations, they should All be destroyed..just my opinion.