Not to complain too loudly, but is there a real reason why the controllers of the drones were able to select the rooftop targets immediately as the concealment went away? If they were looking at Devon on the ground, how did they see the two on the roof in time to target them? Also, they are not directing any fire on the huge spirit? Just questions I am interested in knowing if you considered. If yes, you do not need to explain why, as I am just interested in knowing if these things were taken into account.
Also, I thought that Simone was also under a concealment sustained by Sovereign that he put on her at the same time he did Kynos and the rest of the advance party. Again, if that is not so, it is OK.