@DamnYankee - sent you a fairly significantly changed concept via PM, but never heard back from you. I'm going ahead and posting here so you can comment on the changes.
Erik was born the second of three children to middle class parents, with an older brother and younger sister. He was the classic 'forgotten' middle child. This was unfortunate for Erik as his older brother was an accomplished sadist who took a world of delight in making Erik's life miserable. His parents, while doting on his little sister, treated their two boys with a 'boys will be boys' attitude and ignored most of Erik's torment. Such would have been Erik's life except for one small detail. At puberty he expressed as an Ork - astonishing everyone who thought that the times of 'goblinization' were over.
Erik was at first embarressed and humiliated at the changes he was going through. Puberty is hard enough without goblinizing into an Ork. Erik's brother took full and thorough advantage of the situation until Erik started to grow. When Erik realized he outweighed his brother by nearly a hundred pounds of pure muscle, the situation was reversed. Erik had learned the fine art of torment from a master and in the spirit of 'turnabout is fair play', made his brother's life as much of a living hell as his brother had done to him.
Boys will be boys, but boys grow up. Being really big and very strong had helped Erik with his brother but not with his studies. Erik graduated high school with a decidedly average grade and, taking advantage of his natural skills, started working in security. He did corp sec for a while and eventually worked for a company that provided bodyguards for celebrities. His size and strength - and knowing how to use them - made him very effective. Still, something was missing. Being a bully boy for bored and spoiled celebrities was something that Erik could stomach for only so long. The thrill of meeting celebrities and moving in high society circles quickly wore off and left Erik bored and wanting more excitement.
Erik could have easily slid into the shadows, getting his thrills and paydays as a runner. Instead chance led him to Conrad's Conquerors. It was a match made in heaven. Erik could satisfy his need for thrills with the constantly changing challenges a merc faces; he could have and use the heavy firepower he enjoyed, and, best of all, it was legal!
Erik Stonefield
Ork (20 BP)
Male
Edge (20 BP)
Stats (180 BP)
Body: 7 Charisma: 4 EDGE: 3
Agility: 6 Intuition: 3 INITIATIVE: 9
Reaction: 6 Logic: 2 PASSES: 3
Strength: 6 Willpower: 3
Qualities (25 BP / -30 BP)
Veteran Mercenary 10
Ambidextrous 5
Tough as Nails (1) 10
Thrill Seeker -5
Allergy (Cmbt. Stim.) -5
In Debt (20000) -20
Active Skills (158 BP)
Close Combat (Group) 3
Navigation 2
Dodge 4
Firearms (Group) 3
Heavy Weapons 5
Etiquette 2
Intimidation 5
First Aid 1
Athletics 1
Perception 3
Knowledge/Linguistics (17 BP / -15 BP)
BK:Heavy Weapons 2
IN:Cuisine 2
IN:Cooking 2
IN:Fine Dining 1
SW:Paprazzi Control 1
SW:Patrol Procedures 2
SW:Military Procedure 1
English N
Spanish 3
Sioux 3
Contacts (12 BP)
SSgt Kimball Kineson (quartermaster corps.) 3/4
Major Art Thompson (former CO) 3/2
Resources (10 BP)
Eye Recording Unit
Muscle Replacement II
Wired Reflexes II
Smartlink
Internal Air Tank
Cybereye Rating 2
Flare Compensation
Vision Magnification
Thermographic Vision
Vision Enhancment I
Eye Laser Range Finder
Low-Light Vision
Protective Covers
Erika Elite 3/4
Novatech 5/5
Agent 3
Analyze 3
Browse 3
Edit 3
Encrypt 3
Scan 4
Armor 3
Stealth 3
Resources: 50000NY + 20000NY (debt)
Spent: 52750NY + 13400NY
Remaining: 3850NY
Summary
Stats 180
Infection 20
Edge 20
Mundane 0
Active Skills 158
Know./Lang. Points 17/-15
Positive Qualities 25
Negative Qualities -30
Resources 10
Contacts 12
Total 399/400