Since I lurk enough on character concepts & sometimes comment, I'm throwing this one out for all those I have comment on. and to see what I learned & not learned.
Croc
race: troll-SURGED
magic: adept (but don't tell him that )
description: huge (aleast 8 foot), no horns, scaley green skin, no hair
body 7/9 agi 4 reaction 4/5 str 8/10
cha 3 inti. 3 logic 3 will 4
edge 2 magic 5
intiative 7/8 passes 2
active skills:
unarmed combat 5 MA (mixed MA) 7
inflitration 4
perception 3
outdoor group 1
intimdation 2
swimming 3
diving 2
heavy weapons 3
knowledge:
military 3 police procedures 3 Ork underground 4 Ares Macrotechnology 2
Parazoology 2 English : native Or'zet 4
Contacts: Ares fixer L1 conn 2
qualities:
water sprite changeling SURGE III
SINNER (criminal) records on file
adept powers:
improved str 2, improved body 2, improved reflexes I, combat sense
SURGED:
claws, dermal deposits, underwater vision, fangs, ogre stomach
green scaley skin, no hair, reptile eyes
gear:
low life style, FAKE SIN 4, armored jacket w/ chemical protection 2 & thermal dampning 2, CMTclip w/ redcap nix,
contact lenses w/ flare & smartlink, fake license 3
concept template( Killer Croc from Arkam Ayslum)
background: Croc grew up in the lower class areas and the Ork Underground. Because he was troll, who then slowly SURGED as he grew up. People thought he was an ork or something, since he had no horns, but had troll parents. Like most kids who grew up in Seattles slums, he got into trouble early in life, having several run-ins with Lone Star. Sometime back, he got ask to be the muscle on a job. What the other guys didn't tell him they were hitting an ARES shipment on the docks. Bad luck, planning, and just stupidity botched the job from the start, leaving Croc tangling with security while his 'friends' jumped into the sewers. Croc was subdued finally, well on his way to a long prison term when a corporate suit saw the security footage. The next time Croc saw daylight, it wasn't in a prison yard, it was an ARES bootcamp for Urban Brawlers. The suit had noted Croc was very raw, but had potinel as a brawler. Given the choice on rotting in prison, or getting to bash people, well...what do you think he chose?
Now some months later, Croc is back on the streets, playing for a minor league Urban Brawl team as a blaster, and taking shadowruns to keep his skills sharp and to improve them. The team trys to keep Croc's feature hidden so not to freak out the other team as much as possible, and to spring him onto the major leagues to season or two...
His friends? some say that a few of them ran into the Ghost Gator in the Ork Underground. But the gator is just a myth...right?
Now I have thought of changing the miliary skill to Urban brawl, but it represents what training Croc has had so far. also, Ork Underground with just local area knowledge. SINNER w/ criminal is usually frowned on, but I see it as pass crimes ARES con't cover up once they 'took' him in. The contact is the suit that got him out of prison, but isn't as high on the totem pole as he would like to be, and Croc just a stepping stone up that pole. Swimming & diving is more to show natural skill in the water. I did toy with the idea of Croc being part of the military before being a brawler, and having him be part of a special team with his unqunic abilities
thoughts? etc..etc..etc...
and no, I cannot spell either
