As noted, elf is not helping you. You could be a human, keep your stats as they are, and save 10 points. You could also be an ork, keep your stats as they are, pay 5 points, and have +1 body. Or have less logic, since you don't need logic.
You have a case of average-stats-and-skills-itis, in that you have a ton of stuff but you aren't actually particularly good at anything, and the way you bought it (with lots of 2s and 3s) is highly inefficient for when you go to improve things with karma.
You should be aware that jumping in is a niche move as a rigger; you very often want to be using Remote Control for better dice pools. You should also look into Codeslinger (Control Device), optimizing your commlink for Command, using an Optimized command program.
Wear some PPP armor (say, everything but the helmet and vitals protector) and a leather jacket to get yourself proper armor. It costs a tiny amount of extra money and makes you much less likely to die.
Fake permits cannot be higher rating than fake sins.
Smartlink and Image Link are very questionable implants. You can just wear goggles for that.
All of your vehicles but the Doberman have weapon mounts modded on. Weapon mounts are F, even without a weapon in them, and they can't be concealed. This is a problem.
Take a look at the Mercenary Rigger in my sig for an example of a rigger; you might find some of the tricks useful.
