[Blue_Lion]

Street name WizPlayer Real name Patrick Mathew Smith
Gender: male      Race-Elf  Archtype-combat mage
Stats
body 3  Agilty 4 Reaction 3  Str. 2     Chasma 5  Intuition 3   Logic 2
Will 5   Edge 2   Magic 5  Initive 6 astral 6 passes 1

Skills:
Spellcasting 6     counterspelling 3       Conjuring spell group 2     Infiltration 4
Assesnsing 3      Astral combat  3       Fire arms skill group 2     Perception 3  Dodge 1
Knowledge skills Street drugs 3   Ares macrotechnolgy 2  Sports 3  Militarty 3
Language English N Japanese 3 Spanish 1

Qualities
Dependents Lvl 2 Mariaha Sanches (live in  girl friend.) -5
Addiction Mild (achole) -5
Media junkey minor 5 Pt (porn) -5
Alergy Minor sunlight. -10
Spammed - 5
Mage (Shinto tradion) 15
Adrenaline surge 15
Mentor spirt (dark goddess) 5

Contacts
Suzy (Joy girl) Loyalty 3 conection 2
Tommy T  (Fixer)   Loyalty 2 conection 4

Spells
Power bolt, Stun bolt, Heal, Cure Disease, increase reflexes, Power ball, Physcal barrier.

Gear Low life style 1 month (2.2K) Menta link com with Isis orbe operating system, AR gloves, gogles with image link and smart link mod, sim module, trodes, Fake sin rating 4, 3 rating 3 fake license stim patch rating 3. Lone star Iball (mini drone) Honda spirt

Armor Urban explorer jump suit 6/6

Weapons
Ares preditor iV 3 spare clips 60 reglar rounds concealed holster
HK-227X with gas vent level 2 sling 3 spare clips 100 round reglar ammo.

Quotes
I only streamed porn during the boaring parts...........well all of it was boaring.
Hey check out this out.
Thats it I am taking you down.
No leaving marks dont want to get in trouble with my girl.
I was put on this earth for two things sex and killing people and you are not my type.

Genreal idea: You need some one to take some one out of a fight fast he is your man. His patrons drives him grants him the power to heal and fight, so he will start a fight so he do them. He may drink more than he should, and is obsesed with sex but he knows how to  put a quick hurt on people. Always ready to fight be it with guns or magic.

[Blue_Lion]

Street name Kennin Real name James
Race Elf  Gender male  Archtype Riger-Hacker

Stats
Body 5 agi 6 rec 3 str 2
cha 5 Int 3 logic 3 will 4
edge 3

Skills
Stealth skill group 2,  Influnce skill group 2 pistols 1,
Perception 4,  Cracking skill group 3,  Electronics skill group 1,
Dodge 2, Pilot ground craft 3,  gunnery 4, pilot aircraft 2

Knowledge UCAS Politics 3, Aeres macrotechnolgy 2,  Literature 3 club music 4

Language englash N, Japanese 3

Qualites in
dept -30 points (owes yakuzza 45K 4.5 intrest do every month.)
Mediea Junky -5

contacts
Shades K (fixer) loy 4 conection 4
Shadow sea loy 3 conection 3 (ran it as 4 point matrics, 2 point magic, 4 points members, 2 points influnce 12 point mod)

cybor
control rig
Zeiss sense sataion lline basic
skill wires lvl 3 wired reflexes II
comlink Modifed 5/5
ation coprocessor lvl 3
cybere eye smart link
(essence .05)

gear
Low life style 2 months, 2 skin link(modifed in com and sub vocal mike), sub vocal mike, Tag Eraser, 5 Fake licence rating 4, maglock paskey rating 2 ,magloc autosequencer rating 2, 1 Fake Sin rating 4

Armor
Bike racing armor with bunker armor helmet
Chamelion suit
Weapons
Ingram white knight with smartgun and 240 rounds belt ged
Yamaha pulsur with smart gun and 20 darts
Aires preditor IV with Skin link concealed holster 1 spare clip and 80 rounds



matrix gear Navi tech airwar (modifed 5/5 with soft ware 5/5)

Eastern Tiger Palladium (armor 4, biofeedback filter 3, medic 3 track 4) 6640
Eurosoft cavicula (encrypd decrypt5) 4700
Isis antivirus (analye5 viral resist 3 purge 5 viral reist 3) 1500
Pro user (anaylze 4 brose 4 comand 2 edit 4) 600
scan 3 150
attack 4 4000
Defuse 4 4000
ecm 3 1500
Snifer 5 5000
Spoof 4 4000
stealth 5 5000
exploit 5 5000

Doc wagon paraedic 14400
Mitsuhama home mechnic 14400
target soft4 2000
clear soft 4 2000
Pilot autosoft air 3 1500
pilot autosoft ground 3 1500

[rasmusnicolaj]

Hi

A couple of obvious points. Generally I think you should try and be inspired by Umaro’s archtypes.

WizPlayer is an elf but not from a Charisma Drain tradition and guessing he is a hermetic mage he has a drain pool of 7. He won’t last long in a fight before he is out cold. His skill is not optimized. Astral Combat is bad and spending 20 point on the firearm group combined with an agility of 4 isn’t worth it. If I remember correctly you actually can’t take addiction to alcohol and tobacco (maybe I remember it wrong here). Dodge 1 is really not that great – either have enough dodge that it is worth using or else don’t bother. Physical barrier isn’t that good a spell and you don’t have an elemental attack spell for dealing with drones and vehicles. Your armor is lousy. Get formfitting armor. You should be able to reach 9/7. You don’t have any programs for your commlink – how do you control your drone?
Edit: He is a Charisma drain tradition but still 10 drain isn’t impressive when you could have managed 2 more Charisma without hardcapping.

Kennin has too much invested in skill groups and not enough in hacking and other skills you need to do the job. A Control Rig isn’t that great. Control your toys from AR instead. Math SPU is a great piece of ware for a hacker type and so is an encephalon. You should also look at PuSHeD. Cybereyes are not that good. They cost a lot of nuyen and some essence. It is a lot cheaper to get the same in contacts and glasses. Again the same issue with low armor. Modify your weapons some more if you want them to be good. Get Command 6 (with optimization) if you are a rigger. Get Mute for your Exploit.

Rasmus

[Blue_Lion]

Rasmus

Um Did i not say WizPlayers tradtions was Shinto drain is Will+ charasma page 41 of street magic. And i never had problem staging down drain on most spells,  and some spells i will not cast directly such as reaction enhancment that comes from a force 4 spirt of man. unless i get allot of success on my stun bolt drain with that should not be a issue the other combat spells are. stun bolt is 2-1+ success, i could replace power bolt with punch, but i usaly roll better for drain ressit than damage. And rember he goes first so if it looks like a bad fight lead off with a over clocked AOE and burn down there forces. Andrelin surge means first round of combat he goes first. I droped a point of karma to pick up adrenln surge tha tis why it is 5 not 6. Adding form fitting armor was not because i cant where it with the armor i have 6 is 2 x3 adding any from fited even if it was the shirt 3/o that gives a modifed of 7.5 balistic causing encberance. There are lots of good uses for physcal barrar spell if you know how to use it is good.

You cant put that many upgrades in contacts limit is 3 slots even glases stop at 6. You can loose glasses and contacts harder to loose your eyes. I chose the armor i did for a reason once i get thew a few sestions my main armor switches and jumps up to 11/11 (the 4/7 for the bike racing 1/2 for helmet and 6/2 for form fitted body armor, was one point body away from meeting the requirement, most runs tell then will be with the chamelion armor.)
dont need command with the command link, also AR has a cap on it need full VR actions, get more actions by jumping in and hackers cant steal your drone from you command is fro giving orders to secondary drones, so high rating is no that important when you only have one combat drone. the other drones are for scouting or taking out enemy scouting drones. In my curent group i we often have people drop in and out as i have a better time dealing with socal skills than other players when face is away, and understand the hacking rules better than the other players when the TM and needed more people capable of stealth mission is away this build was about beeing able to coverdown and feel the gaps while not coping them.  The build it self was not about maxing one thing but beeing rounded and doing what the group most needs.

On neither charter was i tring to bee ober min maxed but was tring to develop something some what rounded. If you want i can make a Optimized charter(MIn Maxed or use some cheep exploit)

(Dodge is only on the charter because curnt one requires it on all charters, and that no stat starts out at one.) I did miss the comand program guess he was drunk when he boght the drone. And achole is listed in addtions discription with lots of meets in bars and clubs, combined with the disadvantage of his mentor spirt it is more than worth the 5 points.

[Blue_Lion]

I think this should be pointed out but, your idea on how righers work may be off thinking he needs more armor and use comand instead of control rig.

Things to rember aout riggers.
1. Why the Frack is he in the midle of a fight himself, he is a rigger he can do his job from his nice comfie chair at his house. armor and persnal weapons are secondary at best.

2. Comand tells a drone what to do and the drone does it with its pilot + program for action, Riging uses your skill pluss the program and is done in either cold or hot sim IE more actions than using AR.

3. You cant spoof a drone with a riger in it. Hacking requires entering and going into cyber combat with the rigger.

4. If you dont have a control rig you re not a rigger. (The control rig makes the rigger)

5. Yes a strait hacker can control a drone, and if you dont have the control rig that is what you are. But a rigger is the drone, the car, it puts a charter other wise removed from combat and puts them into it.

Beter weapons the heavest weapon on a standard mount is a light machine gun witch is one his drone has. Belt fed with 240 rounds. (weapon can be moded and improved easer during game play) Not like I have a unlimted amount of new yen to spend.