[Black]

Thank you everyone for your feedback.  The below update incorporates some of the feedback, but not all.  I almost didn't take Astral Hazing as I didn't want my guy to be a changling... but then I figure it actually made sense in a way.  His already a bit of a freak with his magic resistance, what if its all connected? 

The magic resistence, high willpower, adrenaline pump, daredrenaline and astral haze are a good combination.  The mix of astral haze, nasty vibe and intimidation.. his a bit creepy actually...

Added Judas because its a fun quality for the GM to play with.  Combined with the 'Enemy' and the plot thickens...

The bike was expensive... but so worth it...  maybe   Given its speed and the character's weak bike skills and the daredrenaline's thrill seeking effects and the adrenaline pump going off when he gets too excited and it could be the death of him

Anyway, here is Mage Hunter Mark II

Attributes:
4           Body
4(      Agility
5(9)      Reaction
2(6)       Strength
2         Charisma
4         Intuition
2          Logic
5(7)      Willpower
4          Edge

2.17    Essence
9(14)   Initiative
1/2        Passes

Postive Qualities
Biocompatibility (Bioware)
Magic Resistence 4
Changeling (Class I Surge)
- Balance Receptor
- Nasty Vibe

Negative Qualities
Judas
Enemy Megacorp/Yakuza 20 pts
Prejudiced against magic users 5pts
Changeling
- Astral Haze (2.17 meters)

Active Skills
1        Athelitics Group
2       Stealth Group
6(  Blades(Swords)
4(6) Perception (Detecting Magic)
4(6) Pistols (Revolvers)
1      Throwing Weapons
3      Unarmed Combat
2(4)   Intimidation (The Stare)
1 (3)  Pilot Groundcraft (Bike)

Knowledge Skills
3(5)   Awakened Critters (Weaknesses) Academic
3        Magical Theory
2       Corporation/Yakuza(depends on background)
2       Home City areas with known background counts
1       Local Street Gangs
N      Japanese
3(5)   Chinese (Cantonese)
3(5)   English (Cityspeak)

Augmentation
0.3    Cybereyes R2 w/eye recording unit, flare comp, image link, thermo vision, low-light, vision enhancement r3
0.6    Reaction Enhancers R2
2.0    Muscle Replacement R2
1.35  Adrenaline Pump R2
0.1    EPE: Daredrenaline
0.4   EPE: Reakt

Weapons:
Ruger Super Warhawk w/6 rounds each of silver and ex-explosive, personalised grip, smart gun system internal, sound suppressor internal and speed loaders for the bullets, kept in a quick draw holster
Hardliner Gloves
Shockgloves
Katana with personalised grip and concealed holster
5 grenades each of "Petite Blume", flash-bang, breathtaker gas, thermal smoke, and white phosphorus

Armour
Chamelion Suit with Gel packs, r5 nonconductivity and r4 thermel dampening
or
Great Coat with chemical protection, r5 fire resistence, gel packs, insulation and r5 nonconductivity
and always
Form fitting shirt with nonconductivity r5.

Matrix
4 disposable commlinks

Other Gear
Camoflage Netting
R3 Earbuds with Audio Enhancement R2 and Spatial Recognition
R4 Glasses w/ Smartlink and Ultrasound
5 Flourrescing Astral Bacteria IIB
Latex Face Mask
Mage Mask
Medit Kit R6
R6 Microtanciever
R6 Respirator
miniwelder
voice mask
wire clippers
5 Wyrd Mantis Essence

Vehicle
Suziki Mirage w/Engine Cust/ Acceleration, Engine Cust/Speed, Improved Suspension, Racing Tires and Gyro Stabilisation... and racing stripes

Social
1 month of a custom low/squatter life style with a linked r4 fake sin (Mark One)  and fake bounty hunter licence

Contacts
Gang Leader c3/l1
(lives on his turf, does favours for him in return for a secure place to sleep and a supply of Nitro.  Organised his fake sin)
Street Doc c2/l3
Helped him out when he first hit the streets wounded and half dead.  In return, he keeps an eye on her and helps get her medical gear when able

[rasmusnicolaj]

You are not that bad at driving. Reaction 9 is a good basis for manual driving your bike and a dicepool at 12 is above norm average.

I would drop Strength 1 and raise body to 5. That would give you even more armor capacity and an extra condition track.
Strength 5 is the same damage base as 6 so you wouldn't loose anything there.

Cybereyes are kind of expensive and they cost essence. You could get the same benefits from contact lenses and glasses for much less nuyen.

You could save 8 BP and drop your specializations and buy then for karma after your first run.

Rasmus

[Charasanya]

Very nice concept and looks extremely effective!

I would recommend a spoof chip and morphing license plate for the Mirage, its another 1500 NuYen, but those pay off quickly, when you speed right through downtown...

[Black]

You are not that bad at driving. Reaction 9 is a good basis for manual driving your bike and a dicepool at 12 is above norm average.

I would drop Strength 1 and raise body to 5. That would give you even more armor capacity and an extra condition track.
Strength 5 is the same damage base as 6 so you wouldn't loose anything there.

Cybereyes are kind of expensive and they cost essence. You could get the same benefits from contact lenses and glasses for much less nuyen.

You could save 8 BP and drop your specializations and buy then for karma after your first run.

Rasmus

Thanks Rasmus,

Made the Body/Strength change, though his unaugmented strength is now 1.  His was a bit of a weak chummer prior to his augmentation..  Maybe he was vat grown...

He has rating 4 glasses which come with Ultrasound and smartlink. They are fully at capacity.  I don't feel comfortable mixing contacts and glasses together.  I might instead splash out for some goggles.  The only issue I have with goggles is that they seem so obvious and indiscrete.

I've ended up with 1bp left and I have no idea how to spend it.  I am at max gear (250,000 nuyen).  Everything else cost more then 1 pt...

[rasmusnicolaj]

Increase the rating of one of your contacts.

Rasmus

[Black]

Very nice concept and looks extremely effective!

I would recommend a spoof chip and morphing license plate for the Mirage, its another 1500 NuYen, but those pay off quickly, when you speed right through downtown...

Thanks Char and Rasmun.  I made those changes you noted and his all finished and ready to go. 

I did all the work in Herolab and can provide in either PDF or herolab file for anyone who would like a copy?

Thanks All!