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Glyph

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« Reply #15 on: <07-13-12/2151:03> »
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« Reply #16 on: <07-13-12/2243:38> »
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« Reply #17 on: <07-28-12/2254:54> »
I'm assuming JR never responded, so...

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« Reply #18 on: <08-06-12/1541:22> »
So, one way or the other, this game'll be over (and it could be sooner than you expect!).
How should I write and summarize what happened?

One story per character's POV? Or one telling of the story, switching between the different players and GM's POV?
The first could give a good insight on how different the same place and/or situation can look for every player and character in a game... but it could get a little redundant and while I've got a basic idea of what a characters goal is, I'm not inside their heads nearly as much as the player, so my telling of the story might not be completely accurate. Also means more work for me :p

The second will be shorter, quicker and more action-filled, probably a bit more cinematic... but given my limited English/writer skills could get a little bit chaotic as the story switches between different perspectives and not bring across the differences between the players.

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« Reply #19 on: <08-06-12/1547:08> »
I think the second approach is more interesting; the fragmentary structure seems a bit too fitting not to use it, and since it's a little bit less work for you, why not?

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« Reply #20 on: <08-06-12/1631:56> »
^^Agreed.
 
Although, I hope this doesn't end too soon - I just started!  If it does end soon, I hope you run another one so I create my own character and play!
I could wile away the hours conversing with the flowers
Consulting with the rain
And my head I'd be scratching while my thoughts were busy hatching
If I only had a brain...

"Good. Bad. I'm the guy with the gun." - Ash, Army of Darkness

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« Reply #21 on: <08-07-12/0023:23> »
i agree to number 2
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« Reply #22 on: <08-08-12/0754:13> »
One story definately

Glyph

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« Reply #23 on: <08-09-12/1352:36> »
Yes, one story sounds better.

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« Reply #24 on: <08-24-12/1502:35> »
Sorry for the inactivity the past couple of days, a last-minute vacation got in the way. Don't expect too much of me the next week and a half.

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« Reply #25 on: <08-24-12/1709:20> »
That's more than fine.  Any delay of my impending death I can get is fine by me.  :D
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Consulting with the rain
And my head I'd be scratching while my thoughts were busy hatching
If I only had a brain...

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« Reply #26 on: <09-13-12/0521:37> »
GAME OVER.

Congratulations to the winner!

I suppose I'm not the only one who thinks this game didn't go quite as expected and I would really like to talk about this and have your honest thoughts/input/critique on the things that, what was unreasonable, unrealistic, didn't fit in the game etc.
But please allow me the time to first finish a full write-up of the game.

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« Reply #27 on: <09-14-12/1003:40> »
Okay... this is bad.
A couple of hours of writing, I'm at my fifth page and have only covered the first couple of seconds of gameplay. Gonna be a long and (hopefully not too) boring read I'm afraid.

Also, I'm afraid lost your character introductions (all but Glyph/Grey's).
If you're interested in writing a new one (or still have the ones you sent me earlier), feel free to send 'em again. I already wrote a new one, so it's no problem if you don't. You just might like your own one better.

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« Reply #28 on: <09-14-12/1404:55> »
It's all good.
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« Reply #29 on: <09-23-12/1432:34> »
Haven't forgotten the game!
Taking longer than expected to finish the write-up, the headache and fever the past couple of days aren't helping much.

 

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