[JmOz01]

My son asked me to make him a new character for our game, see other posts why it was needed.  He wanted an Ork Combat Biker.  So this is what I came up with.  I see him being somewhat similar to "The Rock" or Dennis Rodman.  Seriously into having the spotlight.  He's not smart, and somewhat uncouth, but still popular with the crowds.  He is known for his sword shaped Mace, and his violent nature, which the fans LOVE

BladeZZZ (Ork)
B 8, A 5/7, R 5, S 7/9, C 1, I 5, L 1, W 1, E 1, Ess 4.85, Init 10, IP 1
Condition Monitor boxes (Physical/Stun): 12/9
Meta Link Commlink Condition Monitor: 9
Transys Avalon Commlink (Cyber) Condition Monitor: 11
Armor (Ballistic/Impact): 21/23
Skills: Automotive Mechanic 1, Close Combat Group 4, Gunnery 4, Leadership 4, Longarms 5, Navigation 4, Pilot Ground Craft 5, Throwing Weapons 4
Knowledge Skills: Combat Biking Circuit 4, English N, Motorcycles 4, Seatle Area 4, Showmanship 6
Metatype Abilities: Enhanced Senses: Low-Light Vision
Qualities: Data Shadow (+2dicepool Search/ -1 Track), Day Job (5000 nuyen/month, 10 hrs/week) (1), Dependent(s) (1): Entourage, Erased (Daily), Fame (National), Incompetent: Etiquette, Records on File: (megacorp sponser), SINner
Cyberware:
. . Control Rig (Alphaware)
. . Datajack
. . Transys Avalon Commlink (Cyber) with Analyze (4), Browse (4), Command (2), Command (6), Edit (4), Firewall (6), Pro User Suite, Sim Module, Skinlink, System (6)
Bioware:
. . Muscle Augmentation (2)
. . Muscle Toner (2)
Gear:
. . AR Gloves
. . Bike Racing Armor
. . Bike Racing Helmet with Flare Compensation, Image Link, Smartlink, Vision Magnification, Electronic
. . Earbuds (1)
. . Form-Fitting Full-Body Suit with Auto-Injector, Biofabrics, Fire Resistance (6)
. . Identity: Specify Name with Day Job, Middle Lifestyle
. . Identity: Specify Name with Fake License: Gun, Fake License: Sword, Fake SIN
. . Medkit (6)
. . Meta Link Commlink with Vector Xim Operating System
. . SecureTech Forearm Guards
. . SecureTech Leg and Arm Casings
. . SecureTech Shin  Guards
. . SecureTech Vitals Protector
. . Stimulant Patch (6) x2
. . Suzuki Mirage
. . Trauma Patch x2
Weapons:
. . Franchi SPAS-22 [Shotguns, DV 6S vs. I+1, SA/BF, RC 3, 10 (m)] with Custom Look (2), Explosive Rounds x20, Folding Stock, Gel Rounds x20, Melee Hardening, Personalized Grip, Shock Pad, Skinlink, Smartgun System, Internal
. . Attack of Will (vs. Spirits) [DV 1P vs. I]
. . Mace [Clubs, DV 8P vs. I, Reach 1] with Lanyard, Personalized Grip
. . Monofilament Sword [Blades, DV 8P vs. I-1, Reach 1] with Personalized Grip
. . Unarmed Strike [Unarmed, DV 5S vs. I]
. . Bolas x2 [Special Weapons, DV Entangling, RC 1]


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Suzuki Mirage (Suzuki Mirage)
B 6, Sen 1, Han +1, Fir 3, Pil 1, Rsp 3, Sig 3, Init 4, IP 3
Physical Condition Monitor: 11
Armor (Vehicle): 10 [4]
Skills:
Gear:
. . Complete Skinlink
. . Engine Customization, Speed
. . Manual Control Override, Drive-by-Wire
. . Motorcycle Gyro Stabilization
. . Pimped Ride, Level 2

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[JmOz01]

some mods on the character, please review

BladeZZZ (Ork)
B 8, A 3/5, R 3/5, S 5/7, C 4, I 5, L 2, W 3, E 1, Ess 2.27, Init 8/10, IP 1/3
Condition Monitor boxes (Physical/Stun): 12/10
Meta Link Commlink Condition Monitor: 9
Novatech Airwave Commlink (Cyber) Condition Monitor: 11
Armor (Ballistic/Impact): 21/23
Skills: Automotive Mechanic 4, Close Combat Group 4, Exotic Ranged Weapon: Bolas 4, Gunnery 4, Leadership 5, Longarms 1, Navigation 1, Pilot Ground Craft 5
Knowledge Skills: Bike Maintnance 1, Combat Biking Circuit 4, English N, Motorcycles 4, Safe Houses 2, Seatle Area 4, Showmanship 6
Metatype Abilities: Enhanced Senses: Low-Light Vision
Qualities: Biocompatibility (Cyberware), Data Shadow (+2dicepool Search/ -1 Track), Day Job (5000 nuyen/month, 10 hrs/week) (1), Dependent(s) (1): Entourage, Erased (Daily), Fame (National), Incompetent: Etiquette, Records on File: (megacorp sponser), SINner
Cyberware:
. . Control Rig (Alphaware)
. . Datajack
. . Novatech Airwave Commlink (Cyber) with Analyze (5), Browse (5), Command (5), Edit (5), Encrypt (5), Firewall (5), Optimization: Command, Purge (5), Response Upgrade (5), Scan (5), Signal Upgrade (5), Sim Module, Modified for Hot Sim, Skinlink, System (5)
. . Wired Reflexes (2)
Bioware:
. . Muscle Augmentation (2)
. . Muscle Toner (2)
Gear:
. . AR Gloves
. . Bike Racing Armor
. . Bike Racing Helmet with Flare Compensation, Image Link, Skinlink, Vision Enhancement (3), Vision Magnification, Electronic
. . Contact Lenses (3) with Flare Compensation, Image Link, Smartlink
. . Earbuds (3) with Audio Enhancement (3)
. . Form-Fitting Full-Body Suit with Auto-Injector, Biofabrics, Fire Resistance (6), Skinlink
. . Identity: Specify Name with Day Job, Middle Lifestyle
. . Identity: Specify Name with Fake License: Muscle Augmentation, Fake License: Muscle Toner, Fake License: Pistol, Fake License: Shotgun, Fake License: Sword, Fake License: Wired Reflexes, Fake SIN
. . Medkit (6)
. . Meta Link Commlink with Vector Xim Operating System
. . SecureTech Forearm Guards
. . SecureTech Leg and Arm Casings
. . SecureTech Shin  Guards
. . SecureTech Vitals Protector
. . Stimulant Patch (6) x3
. . Subvocal Microphone
. . Suzuki Mirage
. . Trauma Patch x2
Weapons:
. . Ares Predator IV [Pistols, DV 6P vs. B-1, SA, RC 2, 15 (c)] with Explosive Rounds x15, Lanyard, Personalized Grip, Skinlink, Smartgun System, Internal
. . Franchi SPAS-22 [Shotguns, DV 8P vs. B-1, SA/BF, RC 3, 10 (m)] with Explosive Rounds x20, Folding Stock, Gel Rounds x20, Melee Hardening, Personalized Grip, Shock Pad, Skinlink, Sling, Smartgun System, Internal
. . Attack of Will (vs. Spirits) [DV 4P vs. I]
. . Mace [Clubs, DV 7P vs. I, Reach 1] with Lanyard, Personalized Grip
. . Monofilament Sword [Blades, DV 7P vs. I-1, Reach 1] with Lanyard, Personalized Grip
. . Unarmed Strike [Unarmed, DV 4S vs. I]
. . Bolas [Special Weapons, DV Entangling, RC 1]


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Suzuki Mirage (Suzuki Mirage)
B 6, Sen 1, Han +1, Fir 3, Pil 1, Rsp 3, Sig 3, Init 4, IP 3
Physical Condition Monitor: 11
Armor (Vehicle): 10 [4]
Skills:
Gear:
. . Ammo Drum/Box
. . Complete Skinlink
. . Engine Customization, Speed
. . Manual Control Override, Drive-by-Wire
. . Motorcycle Gyro Stabilization
. . Tool Kit, Automotive Mechanic

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[rasmusnicolaj]

You could lower Body to 7. It doesn’t change your condition track and 7 should do it for a good armor combination. Reaction is important for driving and initiative so I would go for 5.

Close Combat Group is 40 BP for 3 skills all used for the same. Just get one of them at 4. I would lower Leadership to 4 and get pilot 6. What are you planning to use Navigation for? I would go for Automatics instead of Longarms ofr freater versatility (but I can’t remember witch weapons are allowed in Combat Biking).

I personally wouldn’t implant a Commlink. It cost you 2000 nuyen and some essence instead of just having your link skinlinked in a pocket. Reaction Enhacer R2 to boost your reaction to maximum 9. If you have skinlink on your bike you don’t need a datajack.

Rasmus

[JmOz01]

will talk to him later about it.  I do thank you for the advice.

The body is a good idea, any other stats you think I can reduce to raise reaction as well?

The leadership is debatable if it should even be on him, it seemed the best fit for getting people to do what he wants by showmanship/fame.  The character should honestly take intimidation from a in play pov. 

I don't think Reaction boosters can be combined with wired reflexes can it?

The guns used are shotguns, thus longarms

He wanted blades and unarmed combat, and the melee weapon used was maces, thus the melee group