Thanks for all the comments and suggestions, I've made a bunch of modifications based on them:
- switched metatype to Human, as it freed up 25 BPs, as well as better met the feel of character I had in my mind
- dropped Erased 2 (will rely on my bad-assery instead
), but picked up Ambidexterous (I know it's not really recommended, but really fit the flavour) - exchanged Automatics for Pistols, and swapped out all my weapons (discovered Machine Pistols are +2 Concealability)
- picked up Intimidation and Unarmed Combat
- installed Tailored Pheremones 3
- swapped my outfit for a different suave suit that has built-in hidden holsters
With this build, I've got a full 200 BP in my abilities, all 400 BP are spent, and I have 197¥ to spare. I can free up 1 BP (5000¥) by dropping the Clean Metabolism and Dietware bioware (both picked for flavour) if anyone can think of a better use for 1 BP.
The guns are two matched pairs. The Ares Light Fire 70s were picked for their decent clip size, and their special silencers, and are modified for concealment within my hidden gun arm slides. They're my hidden guns, available at the flick of a wrist. The Ruger Thunderbolts are kept in the hidden holsters within my suit jacket, but are less concealable and modified more as my primary guns (with SA and BF modes and enough recoil compensation to handle the bursts).
With the Compulsive womanizing, he's taken on more of a James Bond feel, with some John Preston from Equilibrium (mostly in the bad-assery department with the arm slides).
Anyway, does this look better? Any further suggestions are greatly appreciated.
Anton Dimitriev (Human)B
5/6, A
5/8, R
3/8, S
1/3, C
5, I
4, L
2, W
3, E
4, Ess
1.1, Init
7/12, IP
1/3Condition Monitor boxes (Physical/Stun): 11/10
Commlink (Private) Condition Monitor: 9
Commlink (Public, Fake SIN) Condition Monitor: 9
Armor (Ballistic/Impact): 20/17 (in full armor), 17/11 (looking dapper)
Skills: Disguise 4, Gymnastics 2, Infiltration 4, Influence Group 4, Intimidation 4, Perception 4, Pistols 6 (Semi-Automatics +2), Unarmed Combat 4
Knowledge Skills: Covert Ops Tech 2, English N, International Politics 2, Psychology 2, Russian 6, Security Protocols 4, World History 1, World Religions 1
Qualities: Ambidexterous, First Impression, In Debt (Borrowed 25000¥, Owes 37500¥) (5), Poor Self Control - Compulsive (2): Seduce Attractive Women, Restricted Gear: Suprathyroid Gland
Social:. .
Anton Dimitriev with Fake License: Guns (3), Fake SIN (3), Low Lifestyle
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Contact: Fixer: Connection (4), Loyalty (3)
Cyberware:. .
Attention Coprocessor (3) with Implant Medics (6)
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Cyber Safety (Left) with Implant Medics (6)
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Cyber Safety (Right) with Implant Medics (6)
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Reaction Enhancers (2) with Implant Medics (6)
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Wired Reflexes (2) with Implant Medics (6)
Bioware:. .
Clean Metabolism. .
Dietware. .
Muscle Augmentation (1). .
Muscle Toner (2). .
Suprathyroid Gland. .
Tailored Pheromones (3)Gear:. .
Betel (CorpCandy, Jaw) x20
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Commlink (Private) with Skinlink, Vector Xim Operating System
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Commlink (Public, Fake SIN) with Vector Xim Operating System
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Contact Lenses (3) with Flare Compensation, Skinlink, Smartlink
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Earbuds (3) with Audio Enhancement (2), Skinlink, Spatial Recognizer
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Glasses (4) with Image Link, Skinlink, Thermographic Vision, Vision Enhancement (3), Vision Magnification, Electronic
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Hidden Gun Arm Slide (Left) with Skinlink
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Hidden Gun Arm Slide (Right) with Skinlink
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Medkit (6). .
Microphone, Micro with Audio Enhancement (1), Skinlink
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Sensor (Motion) with Motion Sensor, Skinlink
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Sensor (Radio Signal Scanner) with Radio Signal Scanner (6), Skinlink
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Sensor Package, Handheld/Minidrone with Skinlink, Ultrawideband Radar (2)
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Tag EraserArmor:. .
Helmet. .
Form-Fitting Full-Body Suit with Nonconductivity (6)
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SecureTech Forearm Guards. .
SecureTech Leg and Arm Casings. .
SecureTech Shin Guards. .
SecureTech Vitals Protector. .
Synergist Business Outfit with Chemical Protection (6), High-collar Shirt, Skirt/Slacks, Suit Jacket
Weapons:. .
Ares Light Fire 70 (Left Arm Slide) [Pistols, DV 4P vs. B, SA, RC 1, 16 (c)] with Barrel Reduction, Ceramic/Plasteel Components (Level 1), Cyber Safety, Electronic Firing, Hi-C Plastic Rounds x16, Improved Range Finder, Silencer (Light Fire 70), Smartgun System, Internal, Spare Clips, Trigger Removal
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Ares Light Fire 70 (Right Arm Slide) [Pistols, DV 4P vs. B, SA, RC 1, 16 (c)] with Barrel Reduction, Ceramic/Plasteel Components (Level 1), Cyber Safety, Electronic Firing, Hi-C Plastic Rounds x16, Improved Range Finder, Silencer (Light Fire 70), Smartgun System, Internal, Spare Clips, Trigger Removal
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Ruger Thunderbolt (Left Jacket) [Pistols, DV 6P vs. B-1, SA/BF, RC 5, 15 (c)] with Cyber Safety, Electronic Firing, Explosive Rounds x15, Firing Selection Change (SA), Folding Stock, Smartgun System, Internal, Spare Clips, Trigger Removal, Underbarrel Weight
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Ruger Thunderbolt (Right Jacket) [Pistols, DV 6P vs. B-2, SA/BF, RC 5, 15 (c)] with Cyber Safety, Electronic Firing, EX-Explosive Rounds x15, Firing Selection Change (SA), Folding Stock, Smartgun System, Internal, Spare Clips, Trigger Removal, Underbarrel Weight
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Attack of Will (vs. Spirits) [DV 5P vs. I]
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Shock Glove [Unarmed, DV 5S(e) vs. ½I] with Internal Battery x10
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Unarmed Strike [Unarmed, DV 2S vs. I]
Ammunition:. .
EX-Explosive Rounds (Heavy Pistol) x150 [DV +1 vs. B-1]
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Hi-C Plastic Rounds (Light Pistol) x64 [DV – vs. B] with Ceramic/Plasteel Components (Level 3)
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Shock Lock Rounds (Light Pistol) x64 [DV +1 vs. B]
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Stick-n-Shock (Heavy Pistol) x60 [DV 6S(e) vs. ½I]