Sichr, I took a look at your character. Here are the things I noticed. I'm definitely not saying these things are wrong, they're just what I noticed. They're my thoughts and just my opinion.
1. First, it's a completed character, but we're supposed to send it before completing it so he can see karma and nuyen expenses and stuff.
2. I finally figured out you're a rigger... but your pilot skills are only 8? That's super low.
3. All of your skills are super low, but now that I realize you're a rigger... that might be normal. it just strikes me as odd, because you have high attributes that seem to be wasted since your skills are so low.
4. You bought 2 urban explorer jumpsuits.
5. You have 5 sets of armor, and none of them stack.
6. You spent .4 essence on eye implants, why not just get cybereyes? That would get rid of the need for the glasses, too.
7. You spent .4 essence on ear implants, why not just get cyberears?
8. All of your implants are cyberware, it would've been easier on your Essence to mix some bioware in there.
9. You don't have an edit program. You have tons of programs, so remember that you can't run all of them constantly without majorly slowing down your commlink.
10. You don't have any fake SINs or licenses.
11. You have 5 drones, only 1 has a weapon, and none of them are vehicles. Are they just all supposed to be spying tools?
That's pretty much it. Again, it's just the stuff I saw as I looked at it. Everyone has their own opinions, I'm not claiming mine is right.
1: OOps. and I forger to make backup. Hope that can be done...(I finished this so I can upload it to omae)
looks like I would have to do this one more time
2. No, Im not rigger. Investigator. Ex LS, sick and tired. And mostly drunk or immersed.
3. You mean 6x dicepool of 10 or higher is too low? Anyway, I have 27 active skills total...
4. Nope. Read again. Urban Explorer + Urban explorer Helmet
5. Yup. I use to have more clotches in my dresser. At least Jumsuit when I go jogging, clotches when I go shopping/drinking, Cat when it rains and vest when it gets hot.
6. Because I dont want to.
7. same as above
8. same as above
9. No need for Edit. I relly on my memory so I dont have to make any notes. + everything I write into computer tends to disappear in the week. Enigmatic. I`ll find out what happens when I got the time for it.
10. Nope. I am SINner. Legal. As for the gun or other R-rated gear I would have to take the risk
or to buy fake licence when the time is right, well since my habbits right now are more introvert...like sleeping at home or drinking at Aurora, I dont think its necessary.
11. Most of them just obseravation tools. Ferret is build with purpose...it hunts down the pest in my flat, as I have Pest Magnet II and that means sometimes even devil rats get in. It is commanded to shot anything what isnt me. And it doesnt have safe target system, I hope it will aim right if it has to shot poisonous spider crawling on sleeping me.
That to your notes.
On the second, I think I found the reason of our previous disagreement.
I have an image of character in my head, which I try to convert into numbers and share it with GM, who tells me if OK or not OK. Thats all. I never read other players character sheets, because if I want to know something about their characters, all I have to do is to ask in IC. I dont argument/talk/post too much about the character creation, because I consider it to be private creative process. Between me and GM. Thats all. I understand that I can miss something or make some mistake from time to time, and then I welcome when someone notices and points me to that (like 20 pieces of the same armor
). But the build as it is is always intentional and is not the matter of discussion.
The way I am, sorry if I sometime force it upon others. Ill return back to my box and sty there for a while...
