I actually thought it was fairly well done. The writing of this, and all the previous The Gamers videos, has been fairly consistent. It's made to play up the stereotype of the Borderling-Gaming-Obsessed geek and it does a pretty good job of it. Note that none of the actors in it are mainstream types, it is a fan-made thing, so the budget is also probably pretty low.
All in all, I like it. It's short, cliche, and as I said plays to stereotypes, but I like it.