It looks about right to me, I think. WRT Billings text, do I have any context for VIPs? I immediately jump to Very Important Persons, but I'm a little lost right now, which may be intended. Just wanted to make sure I hadn't missed anything.
Good leads there for follow-up on the RF.
- The leader of the group, Marshall Edgestrom, seems to frequent a bar with which Bookworm is familiar.
- One thing that sort of jumps out to me is McCormack. I don't get a good feel for that guy. He appears to have been responsible for redacting all of that information from the Faculty meeting, which seems odd. He also was tasked with investigating the downed drone from the riot and hasn't filed a report yet. As an ork, I doubt he would be affiliated with the RF, but we know there are a lot of different factions involved here (Yaks, Azzies, etc).